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for Mythical Nonsense

by Sessygirl

person Kerrisa
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing!!! The visual quality, the plot, the characters, the mythical nonsense (xD), It was all freaking amazing! I loved this story to death!!I'm so glad I got to finish it before I went to work today! (Read the last chapter on my phone while waiting for my shift to start). I would have been sorely tempted to break protocol, flee downstairs to the lockers for our belongings for my cell, and have hidden amongst the supplies in the storeroom to finish reading xD!! I loved that Sasuke was a unicorn and gave up his immortality for Naruto, (lol "you're pretty") and Sai in that incubus role was hot!! I really really liked it all! Makes me wanna do a little more research on unicorns =o I didn't get the hint when he laid his haed in Naruto's lap, but it makes since that they'd be attracted to purity. Uwaaaaaha such a marvelous story! I think i'll be happy the rest of the day =] Thank you so so so so much for sharing this!! Now to find out if you have other stories available for me to read!! XOXOXs Kei-Chan
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww. that was such a sweet end. I lived the story, thank you for it all. I hope to see more from you again. ^_^
person lunajen
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow.. You had me hooked from the very first paragraph! I cannot wait until the next chapter.. I've been sitting here going through all of the mythological creatures that i remember from when i was a child, trying to figure out what Sasuke was before you revealed it.. and i was soo off! lol.. But that last sentece in this chapter gave me the chills..
Please update soon! I don't get this excited to read a story very often. I've got goosebumps all over my arms! I'm loving this keep up the amazing work!
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol i'm so ashamed of myself for not knowing what sasuke is lol.
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I thought that's what Sasuke was but I wanted more clues. When Suigestsu said "horn boy" is when it really sunk in. This fic is awesome. Looking foward to the next part.

~Devious
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! UPDATE! hehehehehe.. actually it was the golden blood turning to black goo that was the main give away to me. The head in the virgin's lap was just the icing. *sigh* now if Sakura was unkowingly holding the unicorn's only natural enemy in the mysthical world (aka a "Night-Mare" as several people call them tho I forget their real names. heh) in the form of Naruto... *snickers* THAT would be hilarious to find out. *sigh* sorry I'm rambling. *hugs* I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Selenia
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is very good and refreshing :)
I'll be waiting for the next chapter and, in the meanwhile, I'll be seeing what more you have written, cause I really enjoyed your style.
Thank you for writing and letting us enjoy it!
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Very interesting start! I do so love sci-fi fics. We don't get enough of them around here ^^

The plot is getting started right away, which is something that suits me just fine. When there is action in the beginning, it always draws the reader in quickly. The mystery surrounding Sasuke is so compelling. Definitely one of the best starts to a story I have ever read.

Even if they're attracted to each other really quickly, I think that helps with the plot development. Plus, I also dig it :P

Can't wait to see what happens next! ^^
person fuuton
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have me interested from the start! I can't wait to read more.
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww why does kashi have to be a lapdog hn. i hope he gets freed soon enough. and i hope to find out what sasu is in the next chappie