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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This reads sort of like a supernatural romance novel just with familiar faces, it's nice. The style of writing is a lot different from what I have read from you, I think it's more detailed and maybe that's because this is a world that we don't know quite as well as we do the world of Naruto. I don't know what Sasuke is, I was thinking maybe a wereworlf or shapeshifter but I don't see the funny in those. Maybe he's a fairy or something, I could see the irony in that. I like when the connection between two people is almost instant and a dangerous situation will provide that. It's weird to see Kakashi in a position of obedience to Sakura no less, I hope we hear more about how he got himself into that situation and I hope he turns out to be a decent guy, I guess I'm just not used to see him being bad. Sakura yes because of the SasuNaru fandom that likes to bash, maybe we could hear a little more about why she does what she does as well. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i know what he is, i won't say it out loud though, to keep secret from someone who may read the reviews to find out :D I think it's funny as well, hehe. Love the story so far and can't wait to see what happens next
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SQUUEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! Sasuke as a unicorn... *dies laughing* ( I know you said no guessing but I HAD to say this. and yes it IS a great hilarity. ^__^ ) I love how you're writing this. You even have the whole hatred of elves and fairies down well. That whole "Damn Elf, Fucking Fairy" attitude of most mythical creatures is sorely missed by most people. I can't WAIT to see what else you come up with.
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I may have figured out what creature Sasuke is, but since I don't want to ruin the fun, lets just say I think you've read a book by Peter S. Beagle or watched the movie....
Great chapter, I'm looking forward to the rest of it.
Great chapter, I'm looking forward to the rest of it.
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am HIGHLY curious as to what he is. I think it's so cute he keeps ending up with his head in Naruto's lap like that.