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for Saving Me

by KageKitsuneXXX

person jj
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
“While you may be correct in assuming that I am trying to talk you down, who knows which side I want you to step off.”
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Who are you, what are you doing here?”

“I have come to collect your soul after you die.” Sasuke watched blue eyes widen to almost comedic proportions.

“R-really?”
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Is it because you can’t perform under pressure? I’ve had a couple boyfriends like that.”
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i really enjoyed the humor of this story.
person Toni
schedule September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AHH! I died when Naruto said he was only locked out of his apartment. How damn funny! I love this.
person roro237
schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You had me cracking up with this one:) I just love your sense of humor and this story ^_^
person Kerrisa
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay so I had 4 more oneshots to read before I started in on your multichaps xD now down to 3! Lmao!! Sasuke is really bad at suicidal intervention xD I laughed when he found out about the fire escape xD Lol this was really cute I liked it a lot =D I'm wondering if maybe I should worried... I've really liked all your stories so far, and if I finish/get caught up with them all..then... I won't have anymore of them to read and I'll be forced to either hunt down other stories,or sit here and wait patiently for you to supply with an update D= . . . but i really really wanna get to Role Play, so I'mma keep reading! Lol XOXOXs Kei-Chan
person Sara
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well that was original. Or at least I've never read anything like it. I thought it was great keep it up. ^_^ Thanks~ for writing!~
Sara
person babe
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Since I loved reading your story (Bright Lights), the first of your stories that I've ever read, I figured i'd read the rest of your stuff... just to see if Bright Lights was no fluke. hehe. And I must say, you're pretty good. Now on to your other stories... O yes, thanks for this story too.
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
gah - I missed a new story by you!!!
so glad your in favorite places and chanced to look at your list:)

soooo glad your back(and your life is settling into a somewhat less frenzied state:D)
honey, if you have the time and energy - write, write, write! as long as you enjoy it!
this little fangirl will wait for anything you sqribble;P

as for "Role Play" one of my all time favorite stories, yes please - a series would rock!
if I want to laugh out loud or just lift my spirits, I read your stories, YOU ARE BRILLIANT!!!
I am envious of your talents:)
well...I shall gush no more, on to the current review:


“I am not promiscuous,” Sasuke defended smoothly. “I’m just popular."

I'm having this tattooed to my ass!
this was great fun, and I see potential for continuation(although I see potential for
continuation with anything you write) it was so well paced and funny. your timing is always
spot on!

happy dance! your back!
thank you:)
person IvvyMoon
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol, this was amusing. Sasuke trying to talk ANYONE down from the ledge just makes the mind boggle. And are you serious about writing more Roleplay?!?!?!? Oh, oh, oh, oh, I LOVE that fic! I'm so glad you're planning to add more to the universe.
person noezel7
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story was so cute! I love that Sasuke really thought Naruto was going to jump...AND ENCOURAGED HIM! I would like to see more, but alas this is a oneshot! Oh, and I know this isn't the best place to do it, but I was wondering if you knew anything more about The Lemontree Parade that isn't on livejournal.
person Munez
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So glad you're back! I love your work. This was adorable. You're still in great writing form.