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for Whosoever doth Awaken the Demon

by vanessaclarke

person Anon
schedule October 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like this and wish you would continue!
person FuraMara
schedule March 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is so good i can't wait to see more and *hem* please don't be offended by me saying this but this story seems like it couls easily have Mpreg in it. anyway love the story and can't wait for so more
person BLACKMAGIC101
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw great chapter! Oh and so glad your back!!
person Okami_no_Kage
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is story is fantastic I love that fact that you haven't turned Naruto into a damsal in distress, it really irritates me because I love the fairy tale type stories with these characters but it's so difficult to find one where Naruto isn't turned into a whimpering mess. Please update this soon I can't wait to know what happens next. I also love Kiba in this story he is a great character and I hope to seen more of him. The moments he has with Naruto is good because it builds Naruto's trust.

Anyway Best Wishes and Great Work. Okami_no_Kage.
person dutsada
schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the natural flow of this fanfic. And even though I've read so many medieval-like fanfics, yours is so well thought out and very fun. The characters are very IC and I couldn't help but smile every time Sasuke pissed off Naruto.

Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the story.
person Ivy
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great writing of the interaction scences! Your story has many layers to the plot. Awesome chapter ^_^
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I remember this story from, like, forever ago. I like where you've gone with it!!!

Keep up the great work!
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I gladly await the next chapter, in not a bit impatiantly. ^^ I enojy the way you have presented the plot line, it flows and moves quickly, but not in an agrivating way. I do hope that the next part comes soon. I'm interested to see what Naruto can do and see the two get together. THe story has delightful humor that is fitting and true to the characters. You're doing a splendid job.

now for a fan gorl moment....

WHOOOT!!!!!! Bring on the next chapter baby!!! Bwahahaha! I loves it very very much! XDDD

Okay on with the normal...

Thank you for sharing this wonderful idea. ^^

~Zimm