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for Worst Day, Best Day

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person blu kat
schedule August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That's great that Sasuke stuck up for Naruto at such a young age. I also enjoyed reading your story, Thanks.
person roro237
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was so adorable:) I enjoyed it!
person viper mix8
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chibi Sasuke and Naruto is sooo kawaii!!!
person Mija
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwww I absolutly LOVED this, tooo adorable and sooo CUTE! the funniest part was that Itachi wanted to scare the spit out of them and ended up kicked in the nuts lmaoooo at that one, but seriously I wish this is how it had truly been for little Naru, just the thought of his small self being treated so ugly just makes me soo angry and sad for him I want to huggles him....again loved this thank you for sharing, much huggles and wibbles Mija...:-)
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww.... kawaii!!!!!!!!!! *squeal*
This has to be one of the cutest fanfics I've ever read, it was completely adorable and I loved it.
Naruto and Sasuke were so cute, I was cooing inside my head the entire time reading it. The last part about Itachi nearly made my choke on laughter, poor baby. XD Here he was trying to scare his little brother and he gets kicked in his sensitive place instead... hilarious. And I really loved that you portrayed him as a caring older brother, I do truly love that since he's my favorite character, so thank you for writing this amazing oneshot.
I'm looking forward to your updates! ItaNaru, SasuNaru, yay!
Take care. Hugs =^_^=
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! They are so adorable! I want to just huggle them! *dies laughing at poor Itachi* THAT was just perfect. hehehehehe. I wish I could have been in his head afterwards. It'd probably been a mix of Pride that his brother actually took him by surprise and defended the blond and Embarrasment that again his brother took him by suprise. lol. Love it all the way.
person cynaga
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
too adorable!
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how sweet! This story is great.
person vashta
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet, I don't generally even read a one-shot that I don't think has some citrus, but that was worth it. I love chibi Naruto and Sasuke, and I love it when they have chibi talk. Nicely done and well written.

Vashta
person kai
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww feeling do tend to morph.iits cute how sasuke and naruto talk and the defeat of itachi had me laughing.really cute,love it