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by TheSimi

schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i would worship you like a god(dess) if you were to ever write more chapters for this story as i happen to love it and i cant stop re-reading it tho i dont always comment on it when doing so
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot and funny! The 'kittens' thing really had me laughing and I liked the way the Uchiha brothers bickered over their prize! I hope you'll write more ItaSasuNaru threesomes!
person To lazy to sign in
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was so hot! I loved the setting and the lemon
person Tiina
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha ha this was awesome! I hope there will be another chapter where Itachi will use the paddle!
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh that was so hot. i can't wait to see what's in store for them.
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There's three ways to properly describe this story; lol XD, *nosebleed* and "kyaa!" (fangirl squeal).
I have to say, your SIN-fics have definitely made me a lot more open towards the pairing and made me love it. The stories are all very deliciously hot and humorous, which you combine in a brilliant way, and they are also interesting, meaning that if you'd remove the smut, it would still be incredible.
This particular one was awesome, I love the slightly evil Itachi, he's so hot... and the tight leather pants...omg, I was practically drooling when I read that part, by the time of the lemon I was half passed out from blood loss and dehydration. XD
And calling the round nether parts "kittens" was genius, I was laughing my ass off at the end when Naruto used the term after first thinking it was a complete turn off.
I love these oneshots and I can't wait to read the next one, if one will show up that is. ;)
Hoppas att allt är bra med dig och att du njuter av sommaren, trots att vädret inte alltid är det bästa. Har du ledigt så ta det lugnt och vila, skriv när du känner för det och inte för att du känner dig tvingad.
Ha det bra. Hundra kramar! =^_^=
person Word_Slave
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was awesome!!! So amazing. You have climbed the ranks of SIN and I think I might have to write some more to get back at you... One request... I'd love to see you write the toys and the clothes... oh heavens yes. Please!
WordSlave