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for Hallelujah

by arubinvox

person MellyMoo
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
T_T 1) A really fitting Title
2) Poor Itachi, he's always had it soo hard... Nice imagry and its short and sweet, normally poeple make something like this really long, but this works better then longer pieces.