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for Never Perfect

by Darksidedown

person Angel
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dang it! Practically read it with one eye, afraid to get roped in, I don't even enjoy reading gore ...but I tell you, this chap slayed me! Have already buffed myself as much as I can to counter the incomplete I will soon encounter, but hey you were honest and I was fully warned.

Naruto breaks me.
Sasuke honest to goodness takes me to the clouds LOL - I love his views on Sakura, whoo! Posessive, loving Teme, sniffles!
Thanks :)
person Satsuki
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yup still good ^_^
person Melissa
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I love this story. You give Sasuke to be to one to save Naruto in a very unique way. The character's you have created feel so real. Truly, you are a wonderful write and look forward to reading more of this story as it has become one of my favorites.
person Pervy Sage
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cho sugoi! Another great chapter.

This was a nice, relaxing transitional chapter which I am sure will be wedged between lots of action.

Your description of Naruto by the open window at daybreak was very nice... hopefully some fanart of their embrace shows up. (yes, that's a hint to all you artists out there who are moved enough to be reading reviews!)

Ja ne!

person Halskr
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Naruto with tails is just sexy. The last bit with Kankuro had me laughing so hard. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL. ^^ Embarrassing moments, indeed!
person Tamara
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Leave it to Kank for comic relief. Though I can see where he would have thunk something fishy was going on.
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is so cute. Who would have ever thought the word "cute" would be used to describe Sasuke. But I can't help it. He is so cute because he is sooooooooooooooooooo desperate to get into Naruto's knickers that it is just funny and nothing short of cute!

Another great chapter and even though I have nothing against Sakura I'm glad you sent her back. At least it gets us a step closer to getting Danzo. Haha, betcha thought I was going to say something about smut. Nah, I like plot too!
person a kitsune s light
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!! I loved this chapter!!! I love this plot! And I loved the funny ending!I hope you can update again sooN!
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant chapter keep them comming!!