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for Never Perfect

by Darksidedown

person inuspike
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that ending... T^T So beautiful. Ahem, well anyway, another wonderful chapter!! I;m not sure if I have reviewed this story before, but if I didn't I really meant to. It is wonderful, a plotline that I don't believe I have ever seen before. You write the characters well and you paint the scenery as if I were actually running along the forests and desert myself. Please keep up the good work, I can't wait to see where you take this story next!
person Waffle
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, another wonderfully AMAZING chapter from the uber awesome Darksidedown! Keep up the good work! I just got a new art program that I have been dying to try out, so you might see some more fanart from me here really soon! ;3
person blasterblurby
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very good, i can't wait to see naruto rip danzo a new asshole.
person Purvy Sage
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes. Exactly. He IS a hero! What a great way to end this chapter... he's coming to terms with his new features and hopefully will be wearing them as badges of honor. And just maybe one day he'll really be back to his own self an will use them for levity as well. :-)

Poor complicated-but-wishes-to-be-simple Naruto...

Great fic! I'm still a big fan! :-)
person animelover
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok, can this fic get any better? oh, probably, but DANG!!!!! you just keep outdoing yourself! I'm sitting in a library glued to my seat! yep, you're THAT good. ;-)
person Purvy Sage
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! It's great to see that flash in Naruto's eye! ...and always lovely to see Sasuke preventing his pride to get in the way. Of course, after ferral-Naruto's kiss I suppose the only thing he COULD proudly do was to fully own the "embarassment" of his romantic intentions. Fun! Great character growth! ...and a muzzled Sakura was a cute touch. ;-)

thank you Gaara for being a vengeful AND loyal bastard. I wonder what he'll do in reference to Danzo in the actual manga! *evil grin*
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, witty, insightful and perfect keep it coming!!!

Oni~K
person Ivy
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Seems Danzo is pushed into a corner. Gaara sure pulled Naruto out of his shell. Glad for the update ;-)
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love how Gaara knows just the right thing to say to drag Naruto out of his shell. Go Gaara!!!

Keep up the great work!!
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another exciting chapter. I have millions of questions that I am not going to ask because I actually want to see how this turns out. I'm just surprised that no one said anything about the kiss!

I like Gaara's tactic in bringing Naruto back and out of his self-pity funk!