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for Never Perfect

by Darksidedown

person LadyWolf
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I didn't see that coming at ALL!!!! I thought they were suppose to be Naruto's friends!!!

I bet that rat bastard said that Sasuke and Sakura kidnapped him or that Naruto went feral ...

I really can't stand Danzo!!! How the Hell did he become Hokage again????

Post soon!!
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
w00t!! Gaara!!!


Hooray for Sabaku to try to capture and provide refuge to Naruto!!! (I refuse to believe he is betraying them. Refuse!!!)

Keep up the great work!
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know, I just read through this again and found a few errors. :(

But of course you know I liked the chapter though
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must have missed when you updated this earlier, I'm kind of glad though, because I get to read two chapters in a row. I missed this story. I'll review chapter seven first, I like that we got some serious relationship and Naruto developments. Sasuke is letting is feelings for Naruto be out in the open with Sakura and more importantly Naruto. Sasuke is also starting to respect Sakura, which is good because I think Sasuke needs to be able to trust in other people and I think she can be a really important family member in the future. Naruto is starting to regain a little bit of his former self. He doesn't quite trust Sasuke completely yet and that's great. It shouldn't be easy, trust is gained and Naruo has really gone through a lot. On to chapter eight, what a shocking ending, I wasn't expecting them to be attacked nor was I expecting the person who attacked them. What does Gaara hope to gain by capturing team seven? He obviously cared enough about Naruto to not really harm him but he also disregarded Naruto's obvious concern for Sasuke. Aww, he called Sasuke his love. I'm so excited by these new developments, I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Ivy
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I didn't see that coming! Awesome how Gaara appeared...can't wait for the next chapter ^_^ You have one of the most refreshing, inventive stories out there right now.
person morlana
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woot, Gaara to the rescue, I just hope he's not in league with Konoha. Thanks for updating.
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i hope gaara showing up is a good thing ^_^. naru is in so much pain in this fic, it hard to place which burden you want lifted the most. i'm loving this.
person Waffle
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GASP! D: You can't make Gaara evil, you just CAN'T!
D: < no more fanarts for you.
lol
person Purvy Sage
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool!!!!!

Awesome twist!
person Pervy Sage
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!

If Sakura is as clever as she appears to be, then she must know about the boys? Did she witness Sasuke's declaration of love?! Well... not love I guess... but need. XD

this story is really memorable and exciting! I'm so glad that Sakura is an asset instead of a detriment... and that Naruto seems to be mostly "all there" in the head. I wasn't surprised at him shrinking away from the sharingan eyes... and all cuz Sasuke wanted to share his pornographic thoughts!

Naruto faced Madara with bravery and skill! ...but when faced with SasuNaru porn he can't handle it. Cute. IC concidering all he has been through!

Thanks for sending me the link for the new chapter!

Heh heh heh.... "bandana.". Oh so melancholy and yet random and sweet.