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for Never Perfect

by Darksidedown

schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thank god. i was beginning to worry that you had stopped writing its been so long. this was amazing like always. keep up the good work and please please please update soon.
person Ivy
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Those last few paragraphs between Naruto and Sasuke was beautiful! The way team 7 is growing and changing is great to read. Awesome story ^_^
person Waffle
schedule July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol I'm glad you liked my work! I'm thinking about doing some more fanart for you, since a few weeks back I had a fanart spree for just this story xDD And it really is too bad you're engaged already xD lol jk~

Very very VERY great story so far! Loved the last chapter the most. The fighting was so intense my imagination was having a seizure trying to imagine it xDD

I'll PM you or something when I get around to making more fanarts for you!
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!!


Great chapter! Fantastic job on the fight scene. I loved how epic the whole thing felt.
Naruto chopping off his tails was a bit heart wrenching, although if the tails are going now, I'm surprised he isn't looking to go after the ears also. Either way, great chapter.

Keep up the awesome work!
person Purvy Sage
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow!

3 real tails!

This is really intriguing. I'm excited to one day learn more about that connection and why three and not one or nine or something.

Naruto must have been so fearful to take his own eye... so sad.

Por Naru-Kyubbi-chan!!!!! *waaaaah*
person deathsangel666
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
a masterpiece once again better than the last chapter i might say. you simply amaze me every time. cant wait for more. ahh you send shivers down my spine reading this. update soon, you cant keep us waiting for long.
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have created a fantastic story here. Absolutely love it!! Great Job!!
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That's so sad about his eye... I just hope Kyuubi can heal it once Madara is gone for good. Any chance you're gonna kill Sakura off? (Please say yes... the world needs more Sakura deaths!)
person a kitsunes light
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This story is getting better and better! But it is sooo sad also!
But I can't wait to read MORE!!!!!
Please UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
person Ivy
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Epic fight scene! Why does Naruto have 3 tails? Can't wait for what comes next ;-)