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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aaaww I can feel the tension, it's so exhilarting. Wierd I know. But I really like this story like I said last time... or I think I said this last time. It's sad that Naruto has been reduced to this but I'm glad that he's beginning to heal a bit physically if not mentally. I must admit I'm just as curious to figure out how he got that scar over his eye but I'm willing to wait.
So hopefully they make it to sound without a hitch. And it'd be terribly interesting in they somehow ran into Kabuto. Have you seen him lately. Creepy much. =/ Well bye^^
So hopefully they make it to sound without a hitch. And it'd be terribly interesting in they somehow ran into Kabuto. Have you seen him lately. Creepy much. =/ Well bye^^
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally, SMUT! And I gotta say, the dominant Naruto is just so perfect for this fic. I'm actually more of a SasuNaru fan but I am absolutely loving this so far. Hoping to see some more growth from Naruto in the near future... if you catch my drift ^^
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see a new chapter already.
I see that both Naruto and Sasuke are growing quite a bit together.
Picking up pieces and what not.
But his eye...now that's something I'm ready to know about.
Until then~
A story druggie with a smile.
I see that both Naruto and Sasuke are growing quite a bit together.
Picking up pieces and what not.
But his eye...now that's something I'm ready to know about.
Until then~
A story druggie with a smile.
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really great!
I saw some typoes here and there... like charka instead of chakra... but those little things paled in comparison to this FANTASTIC storyline!
I saw some typoes here and there... like charka instead of chakra... but those little things paled in comparison to this FANTASTIC storyline!
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can beta for you if you wish - I'm listed on the authors' resources forum under softwelshrain if you want to check me out. I can give you an updated list of other authors I'm currently working with so you can check the work out - email me!
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great work once again. had me leaning into my computer to find out what happens next. and i cant wait for the eye thing to be explained, the mystery is great with his interaction between sasuke and sakura. cant wait for another update.
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aw gee, a bit of action ... just for me? you're definitely on my Christmas list now sweetums. lol!!!
so is saku gonna get a clue and give her boys their love time? ooooo, could they ditch her somewhere? lol! i don't hate her, but dang she's in the way. ;-) ok, nuff whining. anyway, i'd be curious to see if leaf tries to hunt them down.
keep up the good work kiddo! YOU ROCK!
so is saku gonna get a clue and give her boys their love time? ooooo, could they ditch her somewhere? lol! i don't hate her, but dang she's in the way. ;-) ok, nuff whining. anyway, i'd be curious to see if leaf tries to hunt them down.
keep up the good work kiddo! YOU ROCK!
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like that team 7 can somehow come together and heal. The part about Naruto being in the shadows and Sasuke seeing a twisted mirror of himself was so beautifully written! I also like Sasuke's thoughts about Naruto having little Uchiha babies ;-) Also, wondering what happened to Naruto's eye and how he is going to deal with everything that happened to him. You do a good job writing Sakura and you make her tough and not so whiny... when some people just bash her in fics so thats refreshing. Hope you update soon!
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beta, you say? ^_^ What can I say, you've got me hooked on this story... if you're still looking for a beta I'd be happy to help out! You can email me at setoassassinplushie_tm@yahoo.ca
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this!
I'm happy to see that Sakura isn't as whiney and self-serving as sh appeared to be in the first chapters. Afterall... I am sure she has grown as
uch as Sasuke and Naruto have.
Sexy make out session! Really pulled on the old heartstrings.
...and the symbolic beam of light with Sasuke as the savior... and Naruto the beast in the shadows. Nicely done. :-)
Please let me know when you update next! :-)
I'm happy to see that Sakura isn't as whiney and self-serving as sh appeared to be in the first chapters. Afterall... I am sure she has grown as
uch as Sasuke and Naruto have.
Sexy make out session! Really pulled on the old heartstrings.
...and the symbolic beam of light with Sasuke as the savior... and Naruto the beast in the shadows. Nicely done. :-)
Please let me know when you update next! :-)