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Well that's alright, no one is perfect. This was a good chapter as well, we got some more growing from Naruto and we got some smut as well. I loved Sasuke's fantasy, it would be nice if Naruto could just go back to how he used to be but it's probably just not going to happen that way. I hope he recovers enough to have just a bit of the sunny attitude he once had. So this is a NaruSasu, I like that Naruto initiated the mornings activities and also in Sasuke's fantasy that Naruto was the doer. I don't think it would be right for Naruto be bottom in this story, not right now anyway. If you really need a Beta, I could proofread and I've read a lot of good romances SasuNaru and otherwise and I've been told I give good story advice, so just let me know.

omg...i cant wait for an update. and trust me when i say that me actually taking the time to write a review is astounding. i read thousands of stories but yours has me hooked. please please continue. i cant wait to see where narutos animal instincts take them next. i would like to advise one thing though, if you wish to continue the pretence of him being animal like dont try to rush through the story to make him all better alot of authors do that so that they can move on with the romance and what not. your doing great so i dont think that will be a problem. keep up the great work and update update update.

I'm addicted.
The story so far has captured me.
Feed the addiction, please?

I really like this story, sorry if I haven't commented to before but I was waiting to see where you were going with this. Love, love the connection that Sasuke and Naruto share in this, it was sort of like a parental figure that I saw between the two of them at first, kind of like imprinting that occurs with certain species. Sasuke can get through to Naruto like no one else has or probably ever will after the trauma Naruto has now experienced. The display of dominance that Naruto performed on Sasuke was delicious, if that's the right word for it. I don't know how much further things would have gone had Sakura not been a unwitting or should I say willing witness to it and maybe that's kind of the point. She's a great measure for just how much Sasuke and Naruto have going on between the two of them. She wondered if she was next but judging by how easily Naruto ignored her after wards, I don't see that happening anytime soon. It was nice to hear Sasuke admit that he's wanted Naruto all along, it's sad that Naruto was secondary to everything else and it will be interesting to see what his place is in the future when everything that Sasuke put first is thrown into view again. Your writing flow is good, no obvious misspellings, some of the sentences didn't make since like: "He won’t Naruto to be pulling." Great chapter. really great story, can't wait to read what happens next.

Great chapter, I am really enjoying this story. I hope Naruto will regenerate his eye and bad side of his body. Well keep up the great work and update soon.

yep, definitely hot! dang, can't you make sakura disappear ... like sasuke using some jutsu to knock her out or something? LOL! ;-) just kidding ... kinda!

you don't disappoint kiddo ... and i'll be lurking to watch for the next chappie. doesn't even have to include a lemon or nothing. lime anyone?

When I first saw this story posted I said to myself "I will not read that story, it has spoilers". And yet I find myself reading it every time you update. I especially like the part with Naruto asserting his dominance over Sasuke and marking him, good job on that.

By the way, I hate you for not fixing Naruto's eye, which I guess in a way is a compliment. Please fix his eye :(

Sakura joined them? strange I never saw that one coming, but it's cool anyway, it just means you continue to surprise us! ahah And I wonder if sasuke willsoon tell her clearly that she will NOT get near naru in that way, eheh.
ALso I loved the fact that naru can at least understand somewhat! And I loved the fact that teme was hs "first" word!
I can't wait to read more!!!!! Thanks for writing!
Also, I LOVED that drawing! thanks waffles! I loved it! ANd it made more curius about the eye!!!!

Dominate Naruto = YES!!! Ha! You just made my day. =^^=

Keep up the great work!

Wow this chapter was amazing! Love the interaction between Sasuke and Sakura. It was sweet that his 1st word was teme ;-) The story is very compelling and definitely something unique compared to other fics. Can't wait for the next chapter!