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for Never Perfect

by Darksidedown

person Satsuki
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I have read what you have already written I think it's wonderful story. I would like to be informed when you have updated this story. Hope to hear from you soon.
person a kitsunes light
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I can't wait to read more!
There's not much else for me to say, I just wanna find out more now!
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha.. is Kakashi planning on summoning Naruto? Tricky tricky. lol Great chapter!


Also: you read my comic? OMG! Thanks! :D
person Morlana
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What an exciting story! Had my eyes tearing! I wonder if they'll get away with it and if Danzou thought to make summoning impossible in the chamber.
person BumbleBee
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is sooooo awesome!!! I´m so totally hooked on it! I like your fast updating and it doesnt matter how short the chapters are they are awesome as they are^^

I hope you will keep up the good work and I cant wait what will happen, I will watch out when you update again(told you totally hooked up :D)
many hugs BumbleBee
person animelover
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
breathtaking! i'm still in awe of this story after reading it three times, and can't stop shaking.....literally! that is just so intense, espcially how naru will only respond to sasu even at a rudimentary level.

let the bloodbath begin! danzo needs to be put down .... painfully and slowly. *evil snicker*

good work!
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a very interesting story. I was a bit skeptical at first, I must admit, but you managed to draw me into the story. I especially love the scene when Sasuke enters Naruto's mind only to discover the real condition that Naruto is in. I could really picture it. And my heart strings really tugged when I saw what Naruto has been reduced to.

Don't you want to smack, Ino sometimes? I mean god, sweetie don't you know he can rip your head off. But oh now Naruto has fox ears. And Sasuke, about damn time really, is finally going to take responsibility for Naruto. Lol he's the fox whisperer.

Oh, oh I found your Kakashi really in character and I really am looking forward to what is going to happen next. Sorry this isn't much of a review but yeah, you definetely caught my attention.

Will e-mail you as well. So ttyl ^^;
person a kitsunes light
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Poor naru again! I just hope you make him understand, even if perhaps he can't speak right at the moment, and that they escape safely! And I hope you update as fast as you did this time again! PLEASE!
And, well there isn't much else to say.. only that : I wanna read mooooore!!!
Thankks so much for writing!
person animelover
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is really starting to heat up! not sure if i've ever read a plot quite like this before so it's very refreshing. thank you for sharing and can't wait to see what you come up with for an escape. ;-)
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, welcome to the world of the authors and authoresses... it's pretty scary isn't it? ;P
I'm glad you like Night Rain, and that I've made you join the dark side... *cough* I mean... ItaNaru...XD Anyway, this review is for Never Perfect and not Night Rain, so I shall shut up now. XD
Never Perfect is a story that definitely doesn't deserve its name because I'm sure it can become perfect considering that the plot and writing are awesome. This chapter was short, yes, but the quick update and contents made up for it. I wonder who's responsible for Naruto's damaged eye... I suspect that it was ordered to be done by Danzo but perhaps the geezer himself never did it...oh, I'm anxious to find out but also to see how Naruto will manage. Will Sasuke bring him back if he truly is broken? Will they get together and how?
Can't wait to see how this will turn out.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing, but do not overexert yourself.
Take care. Hugs =^_^=