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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And again very well written. The second chapter is especially intriguing, seeing how much effort you put into a oneshot.
I love it!
I love it!
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Delightful! Love the development of Naruto's personality via the scrolls and kage bunshin. Shika was a perfect foil to play off of. Wonderfully well written.
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Part two rocks.
Be jealous of either of them--I am.
Be jealous of either of them--I am.
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this chapter! Excellent job with Sakura and Naruto's relationship. And who wouldn't love Shika in bondage?
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked this alot. So much, in fact that I went to your author page and read your Beck peice which I loved. No-one writes Beck which is such a shame and I was just so happy to not only read a Beck fic but a well written Beck fic. But I know it must be irratating to get a review on this story for your other story, so I promise I'm just being lazy and trying to kill two birds with one stone. I think this story was well thought out. It's an idea we've all seen before, but you've managed to make it 'not boring' which takes skill. So kudos.
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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh holy crap...wow. I don't even really know what to say. Hot God damn! Yes, God's name had to be used. This is the sexiest story I've read in a long time. Thank you so much!
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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I adore Naruto/Sai stories, but there never seems to be enough. You made my day.
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June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written and funny story! Keep it up, that was very entertaining ;-)
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June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome One shot!!
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June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yum. Can't wait for more stories. :)