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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I liked what you have created here.
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
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:D
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And for whatever reason... I'm reading the second one here. It's more comfortable, I think. The grays and all... XD
Anyways.
“I’ve said all I can. It’s up to you whether you think your kids are worth it.”
- That was really cool. Loved it.
Oh, wow. Naruto was really impressive. I loved how he handled the situation, it was really great. I feel kinda sorry for Henry, though. Poor guy. :(
Jesus, that entire rescue scene was so intense and so amazingly well done! And then Sasuke got hurt and it was so heartwarming to read about Naruto wanting so badly to help. But, God, when you said The voice was soft, lulling a calm Naruto did not want to feel straight to his bones I melted. I love when Kakashi is having such effect on Naruto.
Hehe, Naruto invited himself inside. Very like him.
And... The man was far too skinny to satisfy him ???
Sounds promising. ;)
It's like three in the morning and I have a long, hard day of field work waiting for me, but i just couldn't help but read this tonight. It's so good, you made the entire cop thing so realistic. I love the little we got of Kakashi and Naruto is adorable for some reason. And yeah, this is exactly cop!Sasuke as I love him.
Thank you so much for writing this! I can't wait for the next part, it should be so interesting to read about them living together, interacting... Giving in and fucking like rabbets. XDD
Anyways.
“I’ve said all I can. It’s up to you whether you think your kids are worth it.”
- That was really cool. Loved it.
Oh, wow. Naruto was really impressive. I loved how he handled the situation, it was really great. I feel kinda sorry for Henry, though. Poor guy. :(
Jesus, that entire rescue scene was so intense and so amazingly well done! And then Sasuke got hurt and it was so heartwarming to read about Naruto wanting so badly to help. But, God, when you said The voice was soft, lulling a calm Naruto did not want to feel straight to his bones I melted. I love when Kakashi is having such effect on Naruto.
Hehe, Naruto invited himself inside. Very like him.
And... The man was far too skinny to satisfy him ???
Sounds promising. ;)
It's like three in the morning and I have a long, hard day of field work waiting for me, but i just couldn't help but read this tonight. It's so good, you made the entire cop thing so realistic. I love the little we got of Kakashi and Naruto is adorable for some reason. And yeah, this is exactly cop!Sasuke as I love him.
Thank you so much for writing this! I can't wait for the next part, it should be so interesting to read about them living together, interacting... Giving in and fucking like rabbets. XDD
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
an interesting start to what promises to be an interesting story. I look forward to reading more about the boys and learning more about their past. I can infer that there's been some kind of a failed relationship there, but it begs the question; what went wrong? Unless it was all in naruto's less than wonderful life. And what happened to force naruto to the streets? Anyhow, keep up the good work and i look forward to the next chapter.
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ho my, it's such a good fic. Well writed, original with cop Sasuke and street rat Naruto.
English isn't my langage so I can't write much. Please update soon, I'm dying to know how Sas and Naruto will
inteect in the house ^_^
English isn't my langage so I can't write much. Please update soon, I'm dying to know how Sas and Naruto will
inteect in the house ^_^
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far what happen next.