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Come on, now, who would want to hurt Sasuke?

hmm interesting, very interesting. who could have done that dirty deed lol. is it sai? hmm but he doesn't seem to be the 'if i can't have you nobody can' type. hmm, i wonder who it is.

...Wow...and you have yet to update becasue?! OMG 'Tachi was sooo mean to Sasu! Did sasuke intetntionally get in a car accident? I hope so :3 That'll teach Ita-nii-san!!! lol Awsome story so far though

Hello!

i really liked the last chapter, but i liked this one even better. It was much better written, and it flowed amazingly! loved the little violent confrontation between Itachi and Sasuke. That was so HOT! it gave me tingles, hehehe..

But noo, Sasuke's hurt. I hope he's all right. <3

OMG!Please review!!!!Please please please please!!I am loving your fic, never shave seen such a well thought confusion of how sucha relantionship would evolve..of course I want them three to be very happy togheter...so please don't let us hanging here!

Wow that was hot... and sad. Man. I hope you update soon.

This is a great story and I think that you're an amazing authoress, the only thing that's bothering me though, is that you use Japanese words incorrectly. The reason it bothers me is because I'm Japanese and that you're learning other people to spell wrong through your work. It's an honest mistake because the majority of people here at AFF do the same, so I'm not trying to put the blame on you. I'd appreciate it if you could change it. Mother and father in Japanese is spelled "Okaasan, Otousan" not "Okasan, Otosan", the pronunciation and spelling is way different. I'm sorry if this has upset you, it wasn't my intention. I'd like to read the continuation of this story because it's great, so please don't take this too seriously.
If you wish to continue using Japanese words and expressions, than please be certain that the words you use are correct before you use them. This website - www.j-prep.com - is a good site for those who are inexperienced. I apologize once more, keep up with the good work.
- Ja ne.

Oooh, that's not fair... Just read this, and I really like it, but that chapter ending was not fair... Poor everyone. And it seems so much like them to not be able to just say something! Maybe not admit to everything, but say something... And now he's in the hospital, maybe now they can??
Really liked it, looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it might be.

Oh my... This was so hot. Those two idiots want each other but don't even know it. Damn. I can't wait for them to realise. I love your stories!! ( I will never be able to tell you how much i do!)

waaaaaaaaaaaaah. Great story I love it. I didn't realize I already read some of your other stories until I checked the author. I love your plot there so original that I like it. I mean after a while of the same plot it gets boring your stories are so interesting. My favorite story from you is the Egyptian one. I love history and you made the story great adding characters in it I learn and enjoy at the same time. I know you worked hard for information for that story. Thank you for working so hard.
Maybe when your finished with some stories you can do some Greek story?