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for Miss Lucy had Some Leeches

by xtabluarasa

person Kaishiou
schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
never expect it would be Iruka, but still an intriguing start. do update.
person bob665
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious enough to continue reading, but it hasn't really grabbed me. When he met his cell mate I felt you could've done a little more. I mean he went from being terrified to falling asleep?
person shishio not logged in
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hiya~! ^_^ I loved the story. (The reason I clicked on it, actually, was because I love the song. ^^) Your roomie doing that wasn't very nice. . . (Don't worry, I understand. My roomie's a real pain, too. :/) Anyway! The fact that you gave Iruka a personality disorder is genius. ^^ And you've got the characterization of Orochimaru and Tsunade down pat! ^^ Naruto, however, seemed just a little ooc when you had him work himself up over the mad patients around him. . . (Just trying some constructive criticism. ^^'' Don't take it as a put-down on your fic. I promise, it's great so far! ^_^) I've never read any other 'insane asylum' fanfics with Naruto characters, so I don't know if it's original. . . But it does fit really well. :D Pwease do Naruto/Sasuke? -Puppy dog eyes- Best pairing ever. . .
person Liz
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story. very interesting and poor naru :(
cant wait for the next chapter :)
person dragon04
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think the pairing should be sasuke and naruto. I like it when sasuke is the seme and naruto is uke.
person SangoStar
schedule July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just love historical themed stories. And this seems my kinda dark. Naru/sasu/naru?
person eve4mem
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sounds interesting so far and is something I can get into, but I think it all depends on the pairing. If this is going to turn into another Sasuke/Naruto pairing I won't be going any further. It's just not my thing sorry. I'm more of an Iruka person ^_^ Put him in the pairing and you'll get a review from me for every chapter. Either way can't wait to see this 'cell-mate'
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Strange title.....GREAT story so far!