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for The Sitter

by KitsuneArasi

schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*ded* this has to be one of the funniest AUs I've read in awhile lol and I read a LOT of them. Naruto freaking out while Kakashi kept insisting on the date and then suggesting what jeans to wear and why? Priceless lol Iruka's description of Sasuke cracked me up. God, I really, really, REALLY hope that this fic hasn't been abandoned o.o
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
FFFFFFFFFFF This is absolutely wondrous. Your writing style is like the nectar of the gods, I swear XD Some of the things you wrote literally had me cackling-- my neighbor just called to yell at me for being so loud at 5 am. I told her to go jump her boyfriend's bones and leave me alone-- pretty sure she didn't appreciate that, but whatevs :D Anyways, I'm really liking this story. Now, onwards to your other works of smuterific art!!

~ The Porn Fairy
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo good! It took me a little while at first to get used to the writing style without all the "sasake said...naruto replied" ect. but it actually flows really well. The pace was fast and funny and totally fun to read. And I agree...I like it better that they aren't jumping right in with the sex yet. And you're writing more? yeah!!!!!!!! And Sasuke having a hissy fit is hilarious. : )
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad I stumbled on this story. It's really cute and had me giggling in some places. I like that you didn't just have Naruto giving Sasuke a blowjob, especially when Naruto repeatedly insisted he was straight. I guess it would have cheatened the moment for me and OMFG is Tsunade Itachi's wife? Did not see that coming. And aww Naruto made Sasuke smile. I love how the Uchiha zoned out when Naruto took off his shirt. It was uncharacteristically cute.

Of course the whole dance scene was hot and I snickered when Sasuke had to deal with the ducks. It was adorable... and interesting how intuitive Itachi seemed to be over his brother. Overall great story and can't wait to see where this goes XP
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You almost name Lady Gaga as his mother because she's the shit and our Mother Monster. Lol.
But I was following This on FF.net. Are we going to see more chapters soon? I like this and was sorta sad when you discontinued updating on FF.net.
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit the last chapter of this ended SO hot thatI went back and reread it TWICE, this added a depth to the lovely funny story.:0)
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schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I want more
and wow!! Tsunade threw me for a loop!
Never saw that pairing before some I'm interested in how you're going to write it

more NaruSasu please...pleaseeeee
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooooooo.............loved the chapter. Go naruto go, molest sasuke!
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just a quick re-read... but now I want a story about little Uchimaki babies. LOL Thanks for that...
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
>.< where's the rest?! :( I need more please. Soon. This was lovely... and a huge tease.