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Oh por dios esto es genial, realmente me encanta esta historia. Estoy intrigada por qué sucederá después, espero puedas actualizar pronto!!

I still just can't get over how much I truly enjoy your story! I hope you update soon!

pretty awesome story! Looking forward to an update.

I've truly enjoyed to new stuff! I don't really like Shippuden, so I'm not too familiar with Bee, but I still think you did a good job on him. It seemed like a plausible story arc for the series. And please do keep writing! You've done a fantastic job, despite what you think. It's a great fic!

Ooh, I'm so happy you updated! (I had no idea till I uploaded my new stuff the other day, or I would've read it sooner.) The rewrites are very well done, though I loved the original. Not quite caught up as I'm getting sleepy, but I'll finish the last few chapters tomorrow. Excellent writing, I must say! Don't be so critical of yourself. Keep up the lovely work and give us some lemon soon! Or lots of lemon, rather. And thanks for not giving up on this fic!

Can I just say that, "I doubt they're toasting my health," is an awesome line? Brilliant!

Guess who just re-read the whole story to see your amazing editsssssss~ <3 Geez, I'm almost embarrassed to admit how much I like this story. Almost.

This most recent chapter was very...soft and fluffy around the edges. Anko's been waiting three years for this guy, I say give her a buttgrab. And I immediately want to retract my statement because she is 12, but I just feel so bad for her! I really love the edits you've made. Orochi is more like the crazy mofo we all know him to be.

on the one hand, "I guess you aren't a child anymore" sexy talk seems appropriate. on the other hand, I feel weird saying that because of her young age. /siiiiigggghhhhh
just give me an oc to live my dreams through hahahaha

(I hate this tablet so much NO ENTER BUTTON ALLOWED OKAY). Guess who just re-read the whole story to see your amazing editsssssss~ <3 Geez, I'm almost embarrassed to admit how much I like this story. Almost. This most recent chapter was very...soft and fluffy around the edges. Anko's been waiting three years for this guy, I say give her a buttgrab. And I immediately want to retract my statement because she is 12, but I just feel so bad for her! I really love the edits you've made. Orochi is more like the crazy mofo we all know him to be. on the one hand, "I guess you aren't a child anymore" sexy talk seems appropriate. on the other hand, I feel weird saying that because of her young age. /siiiiigggghhhhh give me an oc to live my dreams through hahahaha

**Okay, this is the third time attempting to post this. I am so desperate to post this review, I got up from my bed and went to my computer to type this out. THIS IS HOW MUCH I LIKE YOUR STORY OKAY YOU ARE AMAZING. *ahem*

"Guess who just re-read the whole story to see your amazing editsssss~<3 Gees, I'm almost embarrassed to admit how much I like this story.
Almost.

This most recent chapter was very...soft and fluffy around the edges. Anko's been waiting three years for this guy, I say give her a buttgrab. And I immediately want to retract my statement because she is 12, but I just feel so bad for her! I really love the edits you've made. Orochi is more like the crazy mofo we all know him to be.

on one hand, "i guess you aren't a child anymore" sexy talk sexy time seems appropriate. on the other hand, ifeel weird saying that because of her young age. //siiiiiighhhhh

just make an oc and have her live all of my orochidreams hahaha

Wow, just wow. It's really well writen. Well done.