rate_review Reviews

This is nice; seriously! I'm no literary giant, so I can't say there's anything wrong. So long as the plot's stable, and the writing isn't inundated with beginner's errors, I'm content. :)

Wooowowowowowowowow.

Okay, let me start with a proper response to your question. I'm going okay! Yeah! YEAAAAH~ No fame or wealth, just on the right track for my future career finally. C:

NOW THEN JESUS FUCKING BEE. I love B. I want to hold B in my hands and whisper phat beats n rhymes into his ear while we lie in bed, he's so great. Like, he's kinda corny, but in the best way and I love you for making him, haha! The end to this chapter also warmed my heart; I literally started giggling madly. Something about imagining that is too heartwarming for me to handle~ Way to be amazing at writing, geeeez~

Anticipating the next chapter with bated breath.
no really i refuse to breathe until you update



the world is kinda turning greenish oh gee

*doing

It would be really great if I could edit my review, ughhh.

I just can't get over how much I love this fanfiction! I really hope to see an update soon! Also, I am re-writing my fanfiction, because I am a perfectionist, and when I re-read it, I was really disappointed in my own work because I know I can do better! Anyway, so I hope you will continue to read my fanfiction, and review it! I am following your advice, and again, I really appreciate it! Thanks again for the review and for writing such a well-written, amazing fanfiction!

I just now got your review, and thank you so much for your thoughts! I will try to slow down the story a bit, and give more time with minor characters! I just got so excited that I got a bit carried away, and so I got a bit rushed. And, I have college, so I suppose I get a little rushed for that reason as well. Also, this is my first fanfiction to ever appear online, so I'm really not good with this whole thing! Thank you so much for your feedback! I will try to slow the pace a bit, and elaborate more on what is going on during the time lapses. Also, you said you don't normally read fictions that much, and so it is an honor to me for you to read mine! And my very first review, thanks for that as well! If you ever have any more suggestions, criticisms, etc, please feel free to let me know!

Also, I absolutely love your story! I am a big Anko/Orochimaru fan, and so I enjoy that. I will make sure to take more time to show the minor characters, and to, perhaps, make it to where so many of the male characters aren't so infatuated with her.

Also, about the Author's notes through out the story, the main reason I do that is because I have a few of my friends read the chapters before I post them, and they get confused if I don't put the explanations in there, because I suppose they don't have vivid enough imaginations, and so I thought it necessary to make sure that everyone was on the same page. I will try to keep that to a minimum for a while, and see if everyone understands and is on the same page. If they are, then I will continue to keep it at a minimum. If they are not, I will probably go back to the Author's notes.

Again, thank you so very much for the advice, and I think your fiction is beautifully written! You are doing a great job on it, and I hope to see more chapters soon! Thanks again!

-Krissael

Interesting. Glad you updated so I could discover this fic. I hope it doesn't taking months/ year for an update. But life's a busy bitch. Well my total honest opinion....
I like I like. It's just Orochimaru to me seems way OOC.
Any who
I shall be me eye on you.

Ps! Where is the dark themes....

I LOVE your story! I ship Anko and Orochimaru hard! Lol and you did a good job on Killer Bee. I like him a lot. Anyway, I hope you will read and review my story, "The Killing" some time! :D

I LOVE this fic! I hope that you will take a look at mine as well! It is also my first fanfiction to be posted online, and it is called "The Killing." I hope that you continue this fic soon, as I love it so much!

Woah, hey man, it's been a looong while, huh?
I tried staying away from AFF for a while to focus on life, but stumbled back for the sake of nostalgia. How's it going? In any case, loved the last chapter and this one. You've still got a good handle on the characters despite years passing since the last chapter, which is hard to do, so kudos!

I'll definitely bookmark this baby and look forward to more regular updates!

mmmmm... anko cookies...
I have to admit that I am turned on by the dangerous snake.
I loooove aggressive men.
I am such a dirty old woman... XD