rate_review Reviews

Alright, I figured I'd review. I adore it! I think it's cute. Admittedly, I'm hoping to get to more... intimate stuff sooner, but the story is so good I can wait. ^^ Over all, WOOT!

Hahaha awww anko had "the talk" so cute, they grow up so fast. One little thing though for future reference Anko wouldn't be reffering to Tsunade as 'Sama' yet because she's not the hokage yet. Even though tsunade is a relative of a past Hokage, the refference is given to one in power currently so she's just be "sensei" or "san" (sometimes even -dono). Depending on how Anko sees orochimaru he may be refferenced as "orochimaru-sama" by anko, but it would more likely be Kabuto who would call him that as kabuto is more of a servant than Anko who is a pupil. Sorry for the ramblings...so YAAAYYY Anko learning about sex! At least now we won't have "sword and sheathe" talks LMAO.

You have got to stop thinking your chapters aren't any good. If they wern't, why do you have so many people reading the reviewing, huh? :P

Anyway, comments for this chapter . . . I'd be mortified if I was Anko; her asking Orochimaru to do that with her without even realizing what it was she was saying. Still though, makes for a good laugh or two.

This chapter did seem a little lackluster although I did laugh when she learned what mistakes she had been making. I'm starting to feel a little bad for her being thrown from one emotion to the next. I think you should give her a little more time to transition though. One minute she's embarrassed and the next minute she's happy. Now given the news it's very clear to understand why she's happy, but it should've been a sort of embarrassed happiness I think.

Hrm...I wonder just how Tsunade explained sex to Anko. Must have been quite detailed if it went on for ten minutes and left the girl only saying "oh". xD
And I understand your explanation on their relationship. Now...I already feel bad for her and nothing's even happened yet.

Sorry this review is short! But I figure you're gonna get tired of my "It was great"s and my "Can't wait for the next one"s.

since anko wants it so bad let Orochimaru fuck her long and hard the way shes begging so much like a little slut for

i'm glad nothing happen but can't you do a time skip or something were she is like 14?or 13 1/2. To at least understand what is happening? i like it when anko read jiyara's books. Her impression of sex is very funny,

my god I'm so frustrated at this chapter because I want to tell anko to RUN but it's just a story gah! lol god orochimaru is so delicious in this story. just...GAH! I want it to happen to get it over with but I don't want it to end. lol. I eagerly await the next chapter.

I literally fell off of my bed in laughter from Anko's explanation about sex. It was so adorably naive that it helped flesh her character out, which is not always the easiest thing to do. Especially when having writer's block. Very, very happy with how the chapter turned out~. But now I wonder what's going to happen between Jiraya and Orochi. I know that you're not allowed to give out too much information on your story plans, but I'm extremely curious: Are you going to be taking the subservient slave approach with Anko?

Oh! And I'm glad to know that I helped save such a brilliant story~! :D

I was wondering if I could have your e-mail address. I would like to talk with you more about our stories. Mine is wolf_goddess_77@yahoo.com