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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was interesting. And I sorta saw Orochimaru tricking Anko, but it was done skillfully. Keep the story going!
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*wiggles restlessly in chair* I want to read mooore! I didn't think I would get so interested in this story; dark fics usually aren't my style, but I've gotten hooked on this one.
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter and pleasantly what I was not expecting. Your fight scene was pretty good.
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow lol for a minute I thought anko was really gonna get that kiss. Poor Anko, I dunno there's something so creepy about the thought of young Anko and Orochimaru, but something so right too. guh maybe i'm just a pervert. Lol A++++ for this chapter.
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! another update! and the story was riveting as always. I was so happy to catch this update.
take your time with the chapters, I know life is catching up to people right now, me included, but I will ALWAYS be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
take your time with the chapters, I know life is catching up to people right now, me included, but I will ALWAYS be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
For a while I thought I miss the update, but when I checked and didn't find any I feared you had abandoned the story and that would have been a shame. Anyway, good chapter. I'm not sure how you are going to handle this stuff, but I hope you don't throw too much at her all at once.
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September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is a nice change of pace from the usual stories on here. Keep up the good work!
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September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just...wow.
I love this story so far - brilliant characterization, with wonderful tensions bubbling under the surface of all the interactions. I especially like the way you write Orochimaru, not making him 'evil' in a 2D sense, but showing that he's got some depth to his character (personally, I think he's one of the most interesting characters in the series, and I'm usually disappointed by the simplistic portrayal of him in most fanfiction. Not here though, you've made my day by giving him some humor and kindness).
I also like the chapter size - I tend to read when I'm meant to be doing something else, and short chapters are satisfying without taking up an unforgivable amount of time.
I can't wait to see how things develop, looks like there might be a tipping-point of sorts coming up. I'm sure however things pan out I'll enjoy it; you write wonderfully!
I love this story so far - brilliant characterization, with wonderful tensions bubbling under the surface of all the interactions. I especially like the way you write Orochimaru, not making him 'evil' in a 2D sense, but showing that he's got some depth to his character (personally, I think he's one of the most interesting characters in the series, and I'm usually disappointed by the simplistic portrayal of him in most fanfiction. Not here though, you've made my day by giving him some humor and kindness).
I also like the chapter size - I tend to read when I'm meant to be doing something else, and short chapters are satisfying without taking up an unforgivable amount of time.
I can't wait to see how things develop, looks like there might be a tipping-point of sorts coming up. I'm sure however things pan out I'll enjoy it; you write wonderfully!
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm probably alone in this, but I feel some sympathy for Orochimaru.
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god *sniffles* it made me cry. Poor Tsunade. I mean I knewthe story but man it got to me. Go to him Anko!