rate_review Reviews

This was really freaking poignant. Really. I like what Hinata says at the end. The two face, the curse of the shinobi. How ino should let choji hurt her. It wasn't like a malicious thing, but spun off more as a trust, realism kind of thing.

OH my god you update!! I hate to say this but I thought you have given up on this.So happy you did not.
Now to talk about the chapter. I was surprise that it was Chouza but happy now that it was.As I really like there little talk and finding out that MOmo was a a party girl.
I think you did a great job on Naruto and Hinata parts. You really got them down to a T I think.That said I think Naruto hide behind a mask just like ever one else.As he did hide that he was hurt and sad to most people.I am a bit scared of whats going to happen next because of Hinata's words.Any way thats all for now. I hope the next chapter will not be all long in coming but if it is then I will happy wait.

Last thing happy graduations!^_^

This is the best week ever!!! I got so many thing I was waiting for and it end with this update and what a update.

I was happy that Chouji did not lead to any thing. I dont what them to get togather because of a kid. I did like how he got the Icha Icha Tactics for ideas plus what you did to the book was good to. I think you got the book just righ and what it about. Next thing I like was Momo-Chan telling Ino not to hurt Chouji. That had to be my fav part in the chapter. That said the sex was good to. I all was thought Chouji as a eating out person and you did not fail me it makeing it good. I cant wait to see whos nocking at the door and what elsa you do next.

P.s. About the mailing list. I dont now why but it will not work for me. So I just have to chack this ever week or so.

Choji is so sweet ^_^

i like your writing style, and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

it's nice to see you writing imperfect characters, though i got a good laugh, when, in the first part of this story, Hinata commented on how her breasts weren't as big as Sakura's or Ino's (Hinata has the largest bust of the rookie nins and anyone up to the jounin, and sakura doesnt even HAVE breasts)

Oh yes you update this story!!! Man I love read it ever second.I like how Chouji what Ino to call him master and how Ino is all ready gain a bit of weight. Looks like his wish about plumped her is comeing true little by little.Witch is a very good thing in my book.

The sex was just to hot and I love that you let Chouji use his justu. It really does work good as a sex justu. No?Oh the ending made me laugh a bit. I cant wait to see what happens with that. I could not sign up for that Mailing list fast enough. I just hope the next update does not take as long.

You really find this a hardest couple? Diffet thing for differt writers. I all was find them easyer then HiNaru but thats most like because I make Hinata shy like in the manga.

i loved it! I'm so happy you updated. i like when she smacked him in the end! way to stay true to their charters!

Hahahahahaha! That was great! I just love the speech Chouji's Mom gave.I think it's to true and find out that the speech was real make it better. I hope we will see more of Ino hang out with Chouji's Mom. Maybe she will give her more tips as well as fat her up.

Another part I like was the way Ino deal with Hikari. It was fun as he called his wife mother Dragon Lady. Well that all I got.I hope the date goes well.

Edit: In the chapter you said that the sex will started next chapter. So I thought I will ask. Are you going to let Chouji lose the Partial Multi-Size Technique in sex? I mean will he use to make his finger{finger fuck} or his dick bigger at same point? Sorry if this was to much.

whoo hoo hoo!
This is gonna be good!!!
Good starter! I wanna see what happens next!!!

I really enjoyed the second chapter, other than a few spelling/gramma errors it was great.