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person Necro
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay for a new smutty chapter! :D
person satterb
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww! This was so beautiful! I was almost in tears. I really like how you had Sasuke forgive. It was great to see the two brothers on equal footing "so to speak". Thanks for updating this story. Is this the end???? Miss you, and hope you are doing ok!
person Jessica
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gah! o.o That was a wonderfully horrid ending. I will give you my eternal love and adoration if you update as soon as you can. :) Because this story is beast. In the best sense of the term. ;)
person Noonespecial
schedule May 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah, an update! *___* I've been waiting for it. You did a brilliant job, as always. Can't wait to see how the brothers' relationship will develop after this. Oh, and your Nagato is amazingly loveable. :)
person satterb
schedule May 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope the direction you're taking with Nagato is what I think it is!!!! Sasuke and Itachi are so sweet together. I love a "protective" Sasuke. Sorry I got disconnected from you the other day. The power went off! Whaaaa! I hope to chat with you soon.
schedule May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ogm im crying wow. i loved it
person Noonespecial
schedule April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It is just as I always depicted the truth behind the Uchiha massacre. You did a wonderful job on this chapter! So sad and heartwrenching and in-character!
I admire your talent and hope your Muse doesn't leave you. ;)
person Yami
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Thank you very much for the update and I'm glad my review gave you some encouragement to continue on with the story. This chapter was sad but also very cute with the brother's interactions and with Sasuke finally admitting that he could forgive Itachi and move on. I love the direction your story is heading and please don't stress about the canon as this is why fanfiction exists, I much prefer your story to how the manga is proceeding currently because I have never been happy about Itachi being killed off, to me it really didn't serve much purpose and there are so many contradictions in the manga, e.g. it seems in the manga that Itachi had an idea of Sasuke's future path yet rather than continue to protect his little brother, after all the crap they both went through, he chose to die instead even though he knew that Sasuke could inevitably be killed in the end, then there's the whole deal with Madara, then the hints that Naruto and Sasuke will both die in the final battle. Gah! So many contradictions and pointless crap I just can't stand it. Ok sorry went off on a tangent, rant over now, but yeah anyway I am loving your story so please keep up the good work since the true Naruto author seems to be losing his touch, no offense to anyone who actually likes the current manga happenings but yeah personally I don't like how it's panning out.
person satterb
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so thrilled and excited to see that you're able to share your talent again. I look forward to resuming our talks! I've finally got internet access...of my own...again! Been in school and very busy, but missed you and think of you often. It's not like you to worry about canon characters. I'm loving the story and character development YOU'VE created. I look forward to more and can't wait to chat with you soon.
person Yami
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I really love this story and have been waiting for months for an update, you torture us by leaving it at such a crucial part and I would love to see what happens next. Here's hoping you can update soon and haven't lost interest in this story and abandoned it like about 80% of the authors on this site. I have enjoyed your plot and character development and really hope to see more from you.