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person Bluesake
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know you updated! I love this story. I feel so heartbroken over Itachi and whats going on. I hope he can be pulled out of it and sasuke can forgive him. I can't wait for the next update.
person squeaker
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am still loving this story and waiting patiently for update *puppy eyes*
person Noonespecial
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!
Finally someone wrote this! The see-Itachi's-mind-from-the-inside scene. And you've wrote it perfectly! IC, without totally victimised Itachi, with him having his own will and yet with all the sadness and guilt that must be there. Even with the KisaIta hard BDSM part, which I find really good and believeable.
Wonderful job! Thank you for this!
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the fic so far only on ch.8 though so I really shouldn't comment but. I really like the inclusion of nagato but I like it much better when he has the rinningen and us powerfull than withought it and I understand that the loss of rinningen probly is made to go with story or just your personal prefernce but just as my little useless comment/question could you please give him rinningen back somhow or atleast make him somwate powerfull please?

Anyways that. Was just probly a hopless plea but other than tha minor detail I absolutly love the story good charector personality some pretty good sex scence but I was surised with the kakanaru ( pleasantly ;)) I'm usually a sasunaru narusasu kinda guy but I find his story good as far as pairing also I'm extremly sory for asking but I haven't read that far yet... But will itachi get stronger again? Anyways on with the rant I'll say it again I'm in love with story and greatly apreciat your writing and posting and would be thrilled if any of my suggestions were listend too or even just thought about for other fics.

Anyways thanks for posting and I hope you read this if so thumbs up from me!
person squeaker
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YEA!!! New chapter. I am sooooo loving this story.....and Itachi is simply heartbreaking. Thank you for sharing.
person Lore
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Such a sad chapter! Poor Itachi, he still hasn't forgiven himself. I hope Sasuke will find him and comfort him! Looking forward to your next chapter!!
person Satterb
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was great to see this story from such a new point of view. This turned out really well. It left me wishing there could have been some way to stop all of it from having to happen. Thanks for all your hard work on this story. I was thrilled to see it updated. I'm not surprised that this one was a long time coming. Love ya!
person Noonespecial
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So terrubly sad! T____T And the scene with Mikoto bringing dinner, you saw it in the Shippuuden special, didn't you?
I hope Sasuke will find Itachi soon and make everything better.
Oh, and Bishamon is love)))
person mistressofyaoi
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think its good that itachi is faceing his past, a person can run away from many things but there own past isnt one of them...
person Satterb
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! That was one of the sweetest things I've ever heard (read) Naruto say to Sasuke. I'm also glad that Kakashi is giving in a little on the blatant Nagato hatred! As always, this was a perfect addition to the story and leaves me forever not knowing or being able to guess where your going with this! Take care and keep up the great work!