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damnit! why must you make me cry???

i love this story, it truly is well-written, all things concidered.

i belive a great story causes even macho men to become emotionally entangled in the tale; you've done that splendidly!

I anxiously await the next chapter!

Sorry I have been absent for a while. I was busy reading a 30+ chapter fic at the rate of 1 chapter a day plus other stories I've been neglecting to read and write. Very busy. I read this "cycle" chapters 8-11 or as listed 9-12. All of them were great. Chapter 11 or 12 whichever--the last chapter you posted--the ending made me cry when Itachi was singing that lullaby to Sasuke. It was so sweet. Even though their relationship is incest, you really make their love so tender and sweet. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Okay...first, I would like to say that I usually don't like the SasIta pairing...but I was enchanted with them this time. I love the 'innocent' way Sasuke says "nii-san"! *cough cough* Eh-hm...I think that Itachi and Sasuke are really well written. *grins* Especially together!

P.s. Can I kill the stupid ass who is giving Sasuke so much shit? I'd really like him to die. Pretty please with lots of candy and cookies on top?

P.p.s. I just might SasIta to my list of fave pairings after this!

It was so gentle and full of love! Not what I expected, but very beautiful and deep. I hope the brothers will return to the SasuIta order though))
And their life in Konoha... Sure is hard.

Itachi finally is seme. Yum. He is so caring with Sasuke. Iruka is so nice to everyone. Beautiful chapter.

Hey.

Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile. D= I've had to read it on my cellphone because I don't have internet access when I DO have the free time to read it on my computer. 99% of the time. And my cellphone can't write reviews. XD

Good job, on both Divided Loyalty and NRIACAF. =D Although so far, I'm really really into DL... but I'm hooked onto this one as well, surprisingly enough. Only a very good writer would be able to do that. ^^

I LOVE Bishamon! He's even better than Pakkun! Thanks for this chapter. I was nervous for Itachi, but it looks like I'm going to need to save that sentiment for Sasuke. The scene with Kakashi and Nagato was cute too. I feel bad for Nagato, but all of your stories have made me a little used to his history and plight. I really liked Kakashi's response to his inability to read well. Thanks for all your hard work, and I can't wait to read more soon. Love, Beth

I really love this story^^ I liked how you potrayed your charcter really well, it's so amazing. not only that, I find it sweet how protective Sasuke is to Itachi. I looked forward to the next chapter. XD

review. ^^" Sorry.
The characterisations are simply perfect, and the whole "submissive Itachi" thing makes my blood boil)) But suprisingly you write the gen parts of the fic just as well, and though I came here to read Uchihacest I read them gladly as well. Your Nagato is wonderful. *__*
The Madara remark in this chapter made me ROFL, by the way. XD
And the brothers, oh, the brothers... I really wish they could go down to more kinky stuff, but this is your story, so it is you who decides everything))

Thank you for your work and please, PLEASE continue it! It is beautiful! *___*

Wonderful story so far. I love the fact that it is Sasuke who is taking care of Itachi. Keep up the good work.