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person satterb
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL. I love that you've made Nagato illiterate once again! It does seem to complete a certain image of him. His background would certainly support that assumption. Thanks for updating. I really love this story, and feel doubly blessed that you've been working on two great fics not to mention nice and spicy oneshots! Love ya, and miss ya. Can't wait to read more. Beth
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is Kakashi going to come out unscathed in this story????? Poor Kakashi!
person satterb
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! Poor Nagato! I hate to see him sexually frustrated. I loved this chapter too, but was surprised at how open (as in he seems friendlier) Sasuke has become. I still like it though. Looking forward to more. I miss you so much. I hope to be able to talk with you soon!
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while but I had been reading other stories and I couldn't keep up with what I had previously been reading. Anyway, I'm here now and ready to review. I knew Kakashi was going to walk in on Itachi and Sasuke in Chapter 7. Something just told me that he was going to get some real live porn action instead of what was just in the pages of "Icha Icha". :) I wonder what's going to happen now that Danzo has Nagato (Pein) wrapped around his greasy little finger. I'll try to keep better tabs on this story but in case I get caught up again, I'll get back to you ASAP. Until next chapter...
person satterb
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kakashi...he got an eye full! Literally! LOL I love this story so much. I'm glad you had Kakashi talk to the Uchiha brothers about Nagato so that Kakashi wouldn't hold such a grudge. It looks as though Nagato is still being controlled. I know that Naruto could help him, but if he (Nagato) did the right thing to begin with and make things easier....then it wouldn't be your story. Hahaha! You've got to love the angst! I love how shameless Sasuke was about being caught with Itachi! I wish I could have been a fly on the wall too. LOL Sasuke can't get enough! So hot. Love it girl! I've been busy moving but as soon as I can I will try to get in touch with you...take care sweetie! Love...Beth
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just when I think that this plot is going to be easy on my nerves......

Good grief, I cannot wait to see where this is going. You have an uncanny knack to unsettle things just when it seems that things are settling down. I must say that I love your "Nagato". He is always so real and human in your fiction as opposed to the manga where you don't find out how real he actually is until much later (don't want to spoil the fun for the anime watchers).
person Yuki
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This seems a... strange twist to the story. o.o I'm all weirded out by your description of Danzou's mind. A cesspool of darkness indeed...
person Yuki
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I can't really find any good fanfics where Kakashi is Uke for Naruto OR sasuke. >.> I hope Naruto is seme for most of this fic, because I'd love you forever if you did. XD
person satterb
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AAUUUUGGGHHHH! All the Uchihas want to do is be left alone to screw like the fluffy little bunnies that they are! LOL And here comes the Angst Queen throwing a big old monkey wrench into the story! But you never fail to lead a story into the great unknown. Keeps me on the edge of my seat and drooling like a starving dog to find out what happens next. Thanks for the hard work on this story. I really look forward to seeing what is going to develop here. Love ya! Beth
person squeaker
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story greatly. I wish the chapters were a little longer, but eh, I am no better. Good luck with this, it is a good story.