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It's nice to hear that you are indulging in a little self pampering! I hope you don't think that all your fans expect you to only cater to our needs! XD The more refreshed and recharged you are, the hotter and better the updates become! I loved this first time between Sasuke and Itachi. I'm glad Sasuke wasn't violent! Your verbage during sex is getting better and hotter everytime you update! Keep up the good work! Miss you lots!

You can tell how full of myself I am because I truly believe you've made Naruto a "dirty talker" just for me! XD I thought this chapter was perfect. But then again, I think all your chapters are perfect. I'm really enjoying this story, and I can't wait for more. I thought the interaction between Itachi and Sasuke was really hot, and they weren't even having sex!!!!! I could never picture Kakashi being a bottom for Naruto. I just think there's something about sex between a Sensei and his pupil that could never change that dynamic. Thanks for updating. I'm glad I was able to find it. It's been a long time since I've been on here!

Great story. At first I was a little hurt by the way Sasuke was treating Itachi. I mean the poor guy's blind and Sasuke should at least offer to help him out. But I'm glad that by chapter 3, Sasuke had quit being such a jerk. I look forward to seeing how this story progresses. Keep up the amazing work.

I agree, the anime is quite convoluted. And wow, your writing is spectacular for someone whose english isn't first language! :D English wasn't my first language either, but now it's better than my original language. And Obito died when Kakashi turned Jounin, at age 13, and we know what happens when Obi-kun gives Kakashi his sharingan :'(...the whole Tobito thing is so old xD

AHA! I knew it!!!! Kakashi and Naruto are together in this one. EEEEEEE! And yes, you are the QUEEN of UST! I just want to grab these two up and squeeze them till they pop. My heart is just torn in two! LOL. Both Sasuke and Itachi are pathetic in their own rights. It breaks my heart. I feel doubly blessed that you are giving us two great stories right now. Thanks for all your hard work! Love and miss you...Beth

I agree ,Sasuke should be pissed.interesting start, very.Itachi being that weak...it's weird not bad just weird.

Great story! Poor Ita-kun :( I wish you would update The Fallen though, it is also a great story. And I LOVE Divided Loyalty, I go to adultfanfiction.net every day just to see if it's updated, and it was the same with Questionable Loyalty. Though I just wanted to tell you, when Obito died, Kakashi was 13, it's true that Sasuke wasn't born, but Itachi was born, he was 4, so you were wrong when you said neither of them were born yet.

Awwww! This is so heartbreaking to read. Great job though! I think you've done an excellent job on Sasuke. It's all such a bitter pill to swallow, so Sasuke's reactions are dead on. I'm coming to terms with such a broken Itachi. This will be unlike any other Ita/Sas I've ever read. Brilliant girl! Thanks so much for all your hard work!

You keep using the word 'seized'. Like in "he never seized to be a brother". I think the way you are using it is incorrect. Seize means to take, capture, or conquer. Like in the phrase "seize him". I think the word that you are looking for is 'cease' which means to stop or desist. Like in the phrase "cease fire". I could be wrong though.

By the way. I am loving this story so far and cannot wait to see where it heads.