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While I was reading through this second chapter, the idea of KakaIta instead of UC crossed through my mind... XD

Don't worry, I understand what you mean by needing a little variety. Sometimes with my book, I suddenly stop and start writing sometimes else, poetry, music, drabbles of nothing... because I can't take the current pace anymore and it's making my head buzz with boredom. ^_^ I'm not into UC, but I still wanna read this... I have a feeling it'ss me more than I expect.

As always...you are right on target with your characterizations! I waited a little while before I started this review to think a bit about what I imagine these two are feeling. You've given me Sasukes point of view, and I have to agree with you wholeheartedly. But I wanted to think that after the initial shock of being sent back to the Uchiha district, that Itachi would begin to see through Sasukes anger just a little. (I like to think that he has great insight) And maybe become a little more self assured and smug once he figures out that while Sasuke is trying to stop "dancing to his fiddle" as you so eloquently put it, that it might be a harder habit to break than he would wish, and that deep down Sasuke really wants his brothers approval. I can't wait to see where you go with this though, cause it's always a runaway rickshaw when you're doing the driving! LOL. I miss chatting with you. Soon I will be able to catch up with you. Hope you don't mind all my "two cents worth" in this review, but whenever you put up a new story, my mind reels with the possibilities. Later sweetie...Beth

A broken Itachi. Well, that's a new one and I'm very intrigued.
Looking forward to more :-)