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for Jizz In My Pants

by PrplGrl

person YojiKato
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, smut. What fangirl doesn't drool for it and long for more? Totally loved! Can't wait to read more.
person Sanee
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job, as always.

I personally liked the first oneshot better than the second so far, but both were tantalizing.

However, there was one thing that detracted from the second oneshot, IMO. "Fuddy-duddy" isn't something I can picture Neji saying.
person I_Want_Vassalord
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XDDDDD YES!!! Neji is an entertainer! :D And something tells me Shikamaru will be back VERY soon!

Loved it! ^-^
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea you've got about the one-shots. this was a great one to start it off.
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love your work! and the oneshots r so sexy. personally chapter 2 was...not better per se, but a hell alot more smexy. slutty neji is so effin hot.


continue!!! ...please ^_^''


*CHIBI Sango gives you cookies as bribe*
person Tyra
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! That was so good!!
Haha, from a dirty cop to a dirty hooker, huh?
Neji's just absolutely hot. I like him this way, hehe.

The ending was awesome too. XD
The smut was of course amazing, but it was kinda hilarious when Neji handed Shika his bill.
Haha! Well, Neji ain't free to fuck, no matter how much he loves it!

I hope you keep writing more and soon!!
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can't nget enough of ShikaNeji! Wow! just WOW!
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow just how i like my neji all slutty!
person ayan
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
shika/neji is just my favorite pairing and, wow, you certainly did them justice. Although, I'm a bit confused about the title for the second chapter (or my brain isn't working right right now). :)
person I_Want_Vassalord
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh PAH-LEASE continue!!! I just love a man in uniform! :D Yay NejiShika!!!