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for Jizz In My Pants

by PrplGrl

person Hello
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! Oh sweet irony. :)
person Synthetic
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As a die-hard fan of all of your ShikaNeji stories, I have to say that there is -NEVAR- enough ShikaNeji pr0n. I felt it was my responsibility to strongly encourage (read: demand) you to continue with the PWP one-shots.

Really though, you are a wonderful writer and I am very impressed with your ability to deliver not only excellent PWP, but you're also capable of writing a story with a good plotline that can keep even ADD people like me interested. (Earth Angel is the bomb.)

I am heaping praises on you, but have yet to say one word about this story. >.> I fail. This was just as amazing as everything else you've written. Neji as a cop is ridiculously hot in ways I don't even understand. And somehow it fits him very well. o.o Keep the awesome stories going! I'll definately be reading!

-Synthetic

person Tyra
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, oh my God. xDD
What a great story. So hot!!
Neji's such a dirty cop. But who could resist Shikamaru and his slutty ass anyway. xD
Ahh, the dirty talking was hot too. And a nice amusing ending.

Can't wait to read more of these oneshots!
'Cause ''Jizz In My Pants'' sounds so promising.
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG that rocks!

You got right back into the game, didn't you? I'm so looking forward to the next one.
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol i thought he was gonna get off(off the hook ^_^) lol. that hyuuga neji sure is sumthin else lol.