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This... is beyound awesome :) love how well everything works together but I do have one small problem with everything and was hoping you could explian it to me (you might have already and I just missed it, so in that case sorry for making you repeat yourself) but why are Sasuke and Kisame together? To me it just seems so random and not to upset or annoy you or anything, but to me it doesn't fit.
But either way this is epic and I really feel for Kakashi

Yay. Minato still has feelings for Kakashi, I'm sorry that Nagato's being treated like that and all, but I just love the pairing, YonKaka is my OTP after all :) Hope the two will meet soon!

Hell yeah! These two are becoming so sexy together. I'm looking forward to a time when Kakashi's comforts increase. I hate the idea that he's sleeping in a run-down shack exposed to the elements. I look forward to more, and I love this new Minato. I just couldn't believe he could be so completely heartless. You Rock! And now another name change???? Love and miss you....Beth

I've been following this story for a pretty long while now, from about when Questionable was half way through. I finaly got around to opening an account, so now I can review your wonderful work! I love the interactions between Nagato and Minato, and I really hope Minato's mean streak is over. I also can't wait for the truth to come out, and see how everyone reacts! Keep up the good work!

I want to cry about this situation. I can't help but almost feel the destitution. I'm happy you've split this chapter between the two couples. Kisame and Sasuke took a little of the edge off. I can't wait to see things get better for Kakashi. I don't want to rush you, but it's almost more than I can bear. And I know they've got a long way to go still. Please keep up the great work. Thanks for all you do! Love Beth

Don't worry, I, your loyal reader, am still reading! ^^

Oh Bloody Hell! This was fantastic! I love your Kisame, and I love how you've done Sasuke. They are so real it's almost scary. Everything is believable and all the characters are still manly and, well, just as they should be. You were pretty subtle with the angst in Kisames backstory about Itachis death. I kind of surprised me. I can completely see that Kisame would shun any attention from anyone after loosing Itachi. I'm just really glad that you have him taking care of Sasuke. He's really what Sasuke has always needed. I think you did an excellent job on this. I've really missed chatting with you, hopefully one day soon we'll get back in touch. In the meantime, sorry to hear of your troubles. I hope things are working out for you now. Take care of yourself, and keep up the great work in your writing! Love and miss you...Satterb

This is soooo painful to read! It's so good, I hate when the chapters come to an end. Poor Kakashi and Nagato. The realism is unbelievable! I love Pakuun too. He's so crass and straight forward. Very fun to read. Really, I'm having a hard time reviewing because this story leaves me almost speachless. I will be very relieved when Minato finally finds Kakashi. Even though it's going to cause Kakashi so much pain. And Nagato will probably be left feeling inadequate but I just want the physical torment to stop. Keep up the tremendous work. I look forward to more. Love ya....Beth

Is poor Kakashi going to come out of this one ok and back to normal?


I love the way your are building the characters here and taking the time to explain the background with Minato and his reasons for wanting to fix things with Kakashi as well as his want for him.

Thank you for responding to my question regarding the other fic.

I look forward to seeing this through!

This was so beautifully written! Poor Kakashi. He's trying so hard. And I'm finding I have to try hard not to hate Minato! LOL. Your description of his treatment of Kakashi was so vivid. It's hard not to bear a grudge! Thanks for updating. I look forward to more. On a personal note, my move is done and I start school in January. So excited! I'll just be thankful when I have internet again. Waaaaah!