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Love the story! Is there going to be a sequel for Hurt Me? Poor Itachi, can't silence the voices :(

Uhh, I just wanted to clear up something...Kakashi was 13 when he became Jounin, when Obito died and gave him his Sharingan, and he was 14 when the Kyuubi attacked, so by the time he was 16, Minato was dead. You can tell because the Kyuubi attacked when Naruto was just born (and what are the chances of that? Kishi is messing up Naruto) and Kakashi is 14 years older than Naruto, so he was 14 when Naruto was born and the Kyuubi attacked.

Ok, just to let you know I've been moving and no longer have internet at the moment. Waaaaaah! But I'm finding ways to long on for a minute or two here and there. But I loved the update, and I don't think you did such a bad job with Fugaku...we don't really get to see alot of him in the manga, and what we do see is pretty much him acting like a big asshole jerk, so I think you nailed him pretty good. I love this pair. Thanks for sharing more of their story...and I think you'll make a good mom someday...Hee! Love ya. Beth

How come you didn't mention Kakashi? You made me love the whole pein+Kakashi pairing though, heck I didn't even know that pairing exsisted! Hope you write more of it since you maybe the only person alive who can pull this pairing off.

Oh, Oh, Oh!!! Thank you so much for this chapter. I (apparently) loved it! I thought it was beautiful to see them working together and I especially enjoyed the clever way you thought to have them describe their chakras to each other. I'm glad Sasuke isn't a total brat. I prefer him stoic and even though he's still young, I feel he should be more than his years. Thanks for all your hard work on this! Loved it and you! Later girl!

Good chapter! I like the way you're steadily building up Minato's role and personality by giving us insight on his past experiences regarding Kakashi and inner feelings. =) And the way Minato compares himself to Nagato... excellent. it gives us a solid ground on which to build up the reader's view of the world you've placed Kakashi and Nagato in. Very nice. =D I'd almost thought you'd died, or been stranded on a desert island because there was no update for at least a week... XD

Anyways, excellent job, and I'm following it every time it updates! (although I might not always have the time to review, since I often read when I'm not supposed to... *shifty eyes*)

Keep updating!

Satterb: I suspect he has to feed to replenish an energy source. =) To "keep the body from rejecting the soul" as Laracroft wrote, but what I mean is that the blood is like an energy drink to the bonds that probably keep Nagato's soul rooted in Yahiko's body. Or something like that. XD

Oh my God!!!! It's so painful to watch, and I am deathly curious as to why Nagato needs to feed on other humans. I can't wait to see what that's all about. I had the best time Friday...I love the way your mind works too! I would really like to see some of the story from Kakashi's viewpoint. Keep up the great work. I really look forward to more. Love ya....Beth

Kakashi and Nagato's situation is so damned sad. I almost can't stand it! The dynamic between these two has become so bittersweet. Kakashi realizes what Nagato is going through is just as much for Kakashi as it is because of Kakashi. They're both victims of terrible circumstances. Almost seems like it would be better to be dead, but they love each other too much to let go. I also love the petulant and childish behaviour of Sasuke. Kisame is the perfect character to be so long suffering. Thanks for all your hard work on this. I love ya girl! Take care of yourself!

Can't wait for the next chapter. This is just like your other Writing- can't entirely predict where it's going to go. =D

welcome back!