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for My One and Only

by Namet

person Anon
schedule October 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So good! Wish you would continue!
person Angie
schedule February 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please please tell you didn't stop writing this story!! Itz really good!! Please please keep writing this story!!
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Such cool stories. I actually had read part of your story Protecting the Chosen One a LONG time ago and had remembered it a few years back but sadly forgot the author and the name of the story and while I did try to find it I eventually gave up because I didn't seem to have any luck.

I then saw your To Love a Bodyguard a few months back but didn't realize it was written by the same author as Protecting the Chosen (and that maybe because I only check the author's other works if I finish reading the story until the recent update and sadly because of school work and RL and because I get bored and forget stories if I haven't read them in a while I haven't finished reading it yet).

On Monday night I found your most recent work To Be a Yakuza's Bride when I was trying to find a story on here that had been deleted apparently (yours came up because I had typed in 'bride' as one of my search words) and finished it earlier today/yesterday (it's 12:26am where I am right now) and I loved it but wanted to see when it would be updated next (since you said it would have an epilogue before the sequel) and to my surprise found both To Love a Bodyguard AND Protecting the Chosen One in your list of written stories!

I was so happy to discover you were the who wrote those stories and I started reading this one because the summary interested me and I love it as well!

Now I come to the biggest part of my review: Are you going to update any of your stories anytime soon? Because it's been almost a year since your last update and I would love to read more of your stories especially this one and Protecting the Chosen One (mostly because your the ONLY person I know that can successfully combine both the Harry Potter world [with my favorite pairing I might add] and the Naruto world perfectly). Please Please PLEASE!!! Update sometime soon because I can't wait for the next chapter....of any of your stories. Until the next chapter. Ja ne ^_^
person Narrassae
schedule May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Epicly Awesome story!! I want to know what else happens. You haven't given up on the story have you? I hope not 'cause I want to know what happens to Kyuubi, whether Gaara manages to get him out, what Kyuubi's reaction is towards his sons. Particularly the son he didn't know about, Gaara. What the hell happened to Minato, and what's up with the change in his name, first you introduced him as Arashi Namikaze now its Minato wth?!!?? (keeping this post pg...)

One thing that I will mention, cuz it's been driving me crazy, I dont know if someone else has mentioned this but, you keep using expect instead of except. Don't know if you knew this or not, I'm just making this clear. Except means not including as in: He discarded all of the invitations, except the one with the orange bow. Expect means to believe a person, thing or event will come, arrive or happen. Just thought I'd let you know. BTW if you need a beta I'm up for it. I'm good at spelling and grammar, it's my thing... ;)

Thanks for writing this story it has got my interest piqued can't wait to see what else happens.

Cheers,

Narrassae
person Launigsiae
schedule October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Are you going to upload "The demon and the knight" too?, I loved the beginning of that story :)

person jspgnh1234
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hi it's me from fanficion... i have a Q- will you not be updating on that site any more??? and if not what site will you update most frequntly?
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just loved the part about giving his heart for his name!! SWEET!!!
schedule August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Gaara might finally get some action after YEARS. I really hope he does. Baby Sasuke/Naruto will be so adorable!
schedule July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AARRGGH!! Please!! I need to know what will happen! Will they get him out of his sealed prison?! What will happen to Naruto n Sasuke!? ;_;
TT_TT Update soooon, please.. TT_TT
person gwyllion
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh lordy!!! Where to start........ >_<

I LOVE YOU FOR THIS!!! It's so hard to find such amazing fics these days. Especially SasuNaru fics! And I went to heaven after reading the last chappie. THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!! Their relationship is so cute. I absolutely adore naruto. He's definitely had Sasuke wrapped in his pnky, doesn't he? Lol.....And their smexing was so hawt! Just how I love it between these two. I especially love how protective Kakashi and Iruka are with their lil' kit. So cute! And I swooned at Kakashi's fight with Neji and Sasuke. My hero! You did an amazing job writing this story and I seriously can't wait to read more from you. Once again, thank you so much for this! I hope you will continue with this longer. :D