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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
how could you do this to me!!!!>.< I love this whole thing i wanna know what happens!!! this really is my fav kind of story ahhhh come back and writes some more lol!!!! Thanks for possting ima be like and adhd kid trying to who keeps checking the computer!!!!!>.<
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mate Mate Mate Mate Mate Mate!!! Please update soon!!!
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope that you are able to update one more time before your trip to India. This story is great and I really enjoy it. And poor Naruto having to go through all that pain. :(
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CHICHI!! I teared up at little Naru's pain, but the fight had me laughing. I cant wait to see more. I do hope you post again before your trip
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Too lazy to sign in but I like this chapter. But one does wonder where Iruka is during ll of this.
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh srry about my last review. I meant as in why was it taking so long for Iruka getting some water?
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG you have to sooo update soon this story is awsome please update soon and I will give you a bunch of yaoi cookies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not very accurate translations. I've always felt if you're not sure it's just safer not to use them. Using my limited knowledge, I'll try to help with some. But I've only gotten up to Japanese Intermediate 1 so I probably won't be completely right either.
Please Father help: Onegai Chichi, tasukete
Hurts: Itai (Itai yo)
For the other two, 'Make the pain go away', I'm not sure of that one. And for the last, Onegai should be okay.
I'm very curious what's going to happen next. And how Iruka's going to react when he comes back. I feel sorry for Kakashi, having to fight off two at the same time, both younger and closer to their primes than him. Let's hope though that Sasuke won't be an ass and will make an effort to keep Naruto happy right from the beginning.
Please Father help: Onegai Chichi, tasukete
Hurts: Itai (Itai yo)
For the other two, 'Make the pain go away', I'm not sure of that one. And for the last, Onegai should be okay.
I'm very curious what's going to happen next. And how Iruka's going to react when he comes back. I feel sorry for Kakashi, having to fight off two at the same time, both younger and closer to their primes than him. Let's hope though that Sasuke won't be an ass and will make an effort to keep Naruto happy right from the beginning.
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is soo good i hope you continue it!!!! i want to know what plot you have instore !!!
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wanna cookie!!!!!>.<
I really am looking forward to the next chapter you have developed the plot so well
!!! Im really glad i stumbled upon this now hurry up!!! lol >.<
I really am looking forward to the next chapter you have developed the plot so well
!!! Im really glad i stumbled upon this now hurry up!!! lol >.<