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for My One and Only

by Namet

schedule April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the story! I just adore the cute uke naruto and the the dominate sasuke. I just can't wait to read more the first chapter just got me hookm on th estory and wanting more...^/-\^
schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your easter present to us was the story of Kyuubi's sacrifice?? And on Good Friday no less???

My, how timely. lol.

Keep up the good work!
schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What did Minato promise? Is Kyuubi still alive? Will there really be a teary reunion between "mother" and child and father and child? Man, that's confusing. Kyuubis as both "mother" and father? Oh, well. Thank you for the update. Please keep them coming.
person biboy91
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just a few plot-holes I noticed, in the first chapter it says that Itachi has gone the last 6 years without taking a mate, yet he is 35 according to the recent ages you posted. So did he not reach maturity at 29 or was he originally supposed to be 22?
That was the only one I guess I found lol. But I came across this because I was re-reading this because it is SO good! I can't wait for the next update. Great Job!
schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
person Dorkchic
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woot! I was soooo looking foward to an update! Thanks for putting it up and hope to see more soon. I think this story is awesome.
person Miko Vampire
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well Kirin got beat up but what about Skankura something tells me she'll try to attack Naru-chan too and when she does I hope Naruto will be the one to kick her ass!!!! (I LOVE SAKURA AND KIRIN BASHING)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope next is finally the fated reunion between father and sons. And is Sasuke correct about his assumptions concerning Gaara. I hope not!
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
poor little wolf so worried about his foxboy he should know a racoon is no match for him! I hope they are able to unseal kyubi....this story gets better and better i just wish the chapters were longer...great job
person Techno Ninja
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love cookies. :3 And this story. Nice work. ^^