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that was adoribaly adoriballllllllllllllllllllll muwahahahaha thanks a bunches!!!

Suck? Heck no, you may have skimmed the details but in essence, I absolutely loved it!!!

What a hoot! You should cont in the same universe LOL

Thank you :)

This was really good for your first try, not bad, there was a few parts I didn't like, but its your fic so what can I say!! I loved the fish ice cream part though, it made me laugh.

I like it, I caught a few spelling errors here and there, but other wise not bad for your first go!
With some practice your stories will come of a whole lot better, practice makes perfect after all!!

You do have a good imagination. I like your idea for this story. Unfortunately--and please don't take this wrong--you don't seem to have the best command of the English language. I would recommend that you get a beta (editor). Nice story otherwise.

lol after sasu brought back the weird snack naru wants ramen lol. that was a perfect ending lol.

AAAhahaha that was sooo cute! OMG fish ice cream *puke* I like the way you decided what has happened based on the last chapters although I'm not as optimistic about the outcome and I don't mean only Sasuke and Naruto coming together! Anyway, that's what fanfics are for so good job! I liked it! And don't worry about the lemons and fight scenes, they don't necessarily need to be long or with details to be nice, trust me, the A/N in the middle of the story are more of a put off :P

Yaaay!! That was a great story especially the past parts.:D Sasuke's so sweet and well he didnt want to miss any sex lol. Naruto is as cute as ever.:D Fish flavored icecream?? LOL thats so funny!XDD