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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit I am interested in this story. I can't wait to find out more about the mark Sasuke left on Naruto and what it will make him do.
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... I wonder what got to Naruto prior to the second ambush. Mystery illness... swine flu? OMG!
lol. Actually you should probably know I was laughing out loud by the very first sentence of this fic. Sakura's more than normal breasts? lol. For some reason it just strikes me as absurdly funny. ^^
Keep up the good work. :D
lol. Actually you should probably know I was laughing out loud by the very first sentence of this fic. Sakura's more than normal breasts? lol. For some reason it just strikes me as absurdly funny. ^^
Keep up the good work. :D
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absoloutly love this story!!! Thanks for the update!!!! I really would have liked it if he had collapsed but well!!! I really think Sakura should be Johin and Naruto ANBU but it's decision in the end!!!! I really hope to hear from you soon!!!!
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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My cpu froze an im not sure if my first review got thru id just like to say that i really like your story so far and that it has a excellent grasp of emtions i almost felt like crying someone needs to bitch slap sasuke once just so he knows not to leave without thinking it would hurt narutos feelings i mean leave a note or a token or something so that he knows ur not messing with him lol if u need any help with your stories contact me at silverdragon0315@aol.com even if i cant help i has like 6 english nerd/buffs friends that will lol UPDATE SOON
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August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've always personally detested it when fanfics jump Naruto up to the rank of ANBU captain right away. Naruto is never going to make ANBU, nor Jounin, nor Chuunin. Naruto is and always will be a Genin. I think he's just going to skip rank and proceed straight through to Hokage. :D
Also, excellent introspective on Naruto! Keep up the great work!
Also, excellent introspective on Naruto! Keep up the great work!
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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im glad you like my excuse. lol. But its so true.
Woow. Nice chapter. I believe Naruto would be a little depressed after having sex with Sasuke and then the bastard leaves him before he wakes up. I probably would be. And the morning after was funny. It was so Naruto. lol. I cant wait to see more.
Oh. and I would guess then to be 17 years old and chunin?
Woow. Nice chapter. I believe Naruto would be a little depressed after having sex with Sasuke and then the bastard leaves him before he wakes up. I probably would be. And the morning after was funny. It was so Naruto. lol. I cant wait to see more.
Oh. and I would guess then to be 17 years old and chunin?
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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad he made it home safely ^_^
To answer your question. Here is what i think
- Naru, Sasu, Sakura, Kiba, Hina, Shino, Shika, Ino, Cho, Gaara (16)- Naru told his dad he was 16, so i assumed as they were all in the same year group at the academy, minus Gaara, his flashbacks made me think him and naru are the same age.
- Neji, Lee, TenTen, kankuro (17)
-Temari (18) Beacuse she is older than kankuro.
To answer your question. Here is what i think
- Naru, Sasu, Sakura, Kiba, Hina, Shino, Shika, Ino, Cho, Gaara (16)- Naru told his dad he was 16, so i assumed as they were all in the same year group at the academy, minus Gaara, his flashbacks made me think him and naru are the same age.
- Neji, Lee, TenTen, kankuro (17)
-Temari (18) Beacuse she is older than kankuro.
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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww poor naru! sasuke better get his ass back to his blond!
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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and I could totally see Naruto being that depressed. I would imagine them (a.k.a. naruto plus friends) as Jounin rank. Not that you have to do that but thats how I picture them. Please update again soon. I fell in love with your story.
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your first real lemon? Wow. You did great. I still havent written a same sex lemon as of yet... But 3 chapters doesnt seem like it would do this plot justice. Please please please! Put out more. Sometimes emotional drama is all we can use to foward our writing. I have to be depressed to write. Thats why Im on hiatus.