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July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah it needs to be finished. its rather good for a first time all the way lemon.
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was not crappy at all. i liked it. what kind of bastard would leave someone in a cave with a fever lol
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please add another chapter please
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a gooooood chappie. You did well, lemon can be tricky but you did really good.
Hm talking isn´t something that everyone does. Some are vocal, others arent - so it´s up to you really. I personally liked the silence because it opened up to a different kind of sensuality. I hope that you will continue and write more than 3 chapters XD
Hm talking isn´t something that everyone does. Some are vocal, others arent - so it´s up to you really. I personally liked the silence because it opened up to a different kind of sensuality. I hope that you will continue and write more than 3 chapters XD
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on, put some plot into it! I mean, don't get me wrong, I like lemon, but straight in the second chapter without anything more interesting happening... please, at least update soon so we see what's gonna happen apart from wild male sex! Oh, btw don't worry - the sex scene was fine, just add some plot to it next time, ok? :P
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July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol i would like to see this completed. but were you in a foul mood when you typed the a/n as well lol, it just seemed harsh.
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July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please continue, I for one would like to read more.
btw: anger is a good emotion when writing fiction, some of my best stories has come to life during times of anger or sadness XD
Keep up the fine work
btw: anger is a good emotion when writing fiction, some of my best stories has come to life during times of anger or sadness XD
Keep up the fine work