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for Ninja Don't Fear Spiders

by ClaireBear

person Cerucci
schedule December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this was so awesome, naughty kakashi, he tricked poor Iruka. that wasnt very nice, but at least he made up for it with really awesome sex.
person blu kat
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so mean. This just seem so fitting to read because I'm watching Supernatural the episode with Dean beening afraid. I'm still laughing about Kakashi. Thanks for the entertainment.
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL
love it! ^_^
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was great, the ending was hilarious.
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I kindda had a hunch that Kakashi was up to no good, but couldn't place my finger on it...then the feeling subsided for a bit until the end, and I cried out 'A-ha!' ...yeah, woke the room mates, lol, but that's okay ^.^ I love that you put the spidars reaction to being home in, haha. Shibi giving him advice...thats priceless. I love your writting style, so keep writting!! Both long and short stories are great! ~TiEnya
person NeonOranges
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods this was adorable, I loved the description of the spider, 'size of a dinner plate'. I actually like larger spiders, it's the small ones I don't like.
person Senna-chan
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
Your earlier KakaIru-fic, Icing on the Cake, is one of my favorites in here, and for ages I've been wishing for another KakaIru from you. I'm in heaven now! XD
Kakashi was absolutely mean in this fic, which usually makes me frown a bit, but the rimming scene was sooo hot that I can manage that. *.* Any possibilities for a sequel? I mean, the ending just demands for it.

- Senna-chan
person cynaga
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great characterizations - nicely written. HAWT!
person Six_Gun_Quota
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Total Kakashi ending.... Superb!
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it! so funny!