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January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 1 Mixed Communication (Ok have issue with computer and can not sign in on my own name and thats cause my daughters signed in and I have no idea how to fix it....cry...I'm HotAnimeGuysFan)
I just ran across your story and have read the first chapter and I am so HOOKED onto the story line and really excited to see how this develops!! YAY
I just ran across your story and have read the first chapter and I am so HOOKED onto the story line and really excited to see how this develops!! YAY
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January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 2 Just a dance (Still HotAnimeGuysFan)
I just loved this chapter!! :) I found it very Erotic and feel its hot enough to melt our computers hard drive and can't believe how vivid you painted the picture of them on the dance floor and the mens room...oh my gosh it was just too delicious!!! I am so thrilled to have run across this story!! :)
I just loved this chapter!! :) I found it very Erotic and feel its hot enough to melt our computers hard drive and can't believe how vivid you painted the picture of them on the dance floor and the mens room...oh my gosh it was just too delicious!!! I am so thrilled to have run across this story!! :)
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January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 3 How Long? (still HotAnimeGuysFan)
The title of this chapter can be take in sooooo many ways ..........by Naruto I mean.....hehehehhe this chapter was hotter then the Thomas Crown movie I just drooled over with Pierce Bronson (may have spelled his name wrong but too tired to look it up...lol....or would that be too lazy??? Nope too tired....have sandpaper for eyeballs but am so hooked onto this story just don't want to stop reading.....damn and I have work monday...think I may have to be content to be a zombie at work cause this is just to addictive to leave!!
The title of this chapter can be take in sooooo many ways ..........by Naruto I mean.....hehehehhe this chapter was hotter then the Thomas Crown movie I just drooled over with Pierce Bronson (may have spelled his name wrong but too tired to look it up...lol....or would that be too lazy??? Nope too tired....have sandpaper for eyeballs but am so hooked onto this story just don't want to stop reading.....damn and I have work monday...think I may have to be content to be a zombie at work cause this is just to addictive to leave!!
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January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 4 In the quiet (still HotAnimeGuysFan)
Loved the chapter and felt many moments seemed poetic and lovely to picture and very endearing!! This story makes you believe that that perfect someone is really out there for you and you just haven't run into them yet...but that its totally worth the pain and wait to finally hold the time you spend with them in the deepest parts of your heart!! This is a pure example why I read yaoi and Naruto and Sasuke fanfiction....I have found so many stories that make you feel so much from extreme giggles to a river of tears....one can only find it here in our fanfiction world.
Thank You so much for being an author and putting into words such a Beautiful World for us all to visit and enjoy!!
Loved the chapter and felt many moments seemed poetic and lovely to picture and very endearing!! This story makes you believe that that perfect someone is really out there for you and you just haven't run into them yet...but that its totally worth the pain and wait to finally hold the time you spend with them in the deepest parts of your heart!! This is a pure example why I read yaoi and Naruto and Sasuke fanfiction....I have found so many stories that make you feel so much from extreme giggles to a river of tears....one can only find it here in our fanfiction world.
Thank You so much for being an author and putting into words such a Beautiful World for us all to visit and enjoy!!
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July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have Naruto and Sasuke's relationship starting out so gentle and connected the morning after- there were lots of nice moments. Sasuke disappointed at not seeing one of his marks on Naruto's neck was sweet. Both of them hoping for more was sweet. But when you had deidara and sakura screeching like gossipy gueens and demanding details- and continuing to press the issue even when it was obvious naruto was reluctant to share- it made me a little angry. it's the first time in 3 years naruto has let himself do something like this. the first time in a year for sasuke- and they connected---to have the 2 screeching banshees belittle it by wanting play by play action as if it were their right to watch naruto's intimate moments like some porn movie--it just disturbed me---sakura and deidara may think they were having fun and it was all in good fun- but it was at the expense of naruto wanting to keep this special event for himself and sasuke. talking about the 'details' cheapens and belittles the things naruto and sauke shared---if they wanted to let people know they would have taped it and put it on you-tube.
it seems pretty obvious that naruto can stay in japan- (Do you have anyone picked yet to manage operations once everything is in place?”) who better than naruto.
I find the story very entertaining. There are a few spelling errors and some mixed up words- such as 'too' instead of 'to'- but not enough to detract from the story- very few infact. i don't like sakura in 90% of the stories i read- so your characterization isn't bad- i just am one of those people- don't even like her in the anime or manga or movies- so that's no fault of yours. your characterizations of sasuke and naruto are coming along very nicely- already letting us see bits of their true selves under the surface. don't like deidara very much- but then again i almost never do- the same deal with him as i explained about sakura. the bits about itachi aren't much but enough to catch interest and want to learn more.
you're a good story teller. i look forward to reading more. thanks for sharing.
it seems pretty obvious that naruto can stay in japan- (Do you have anyone picked yet to manage operations once everything is in place?”) who better than naruto.
I find the story very entertaining. There are a few spelling errors and some mixed up words- such as 'too' instead of 'to'- but not enough to detract from the story- very few infact. i don't like sakura in 90% of the stories i read- so your characterization isn't bad- i just am one of those people- don't even like her in the anime or manga or movies- so that's no fault of yours. your characterizations of sasuke and naruto are coming along very nicely- already letting us see bits of their true selves under the surface. don't like deidara very much- but then again i almost never do- the same deal with him as i explained about sakura. the bits about itachi aren't much but enough to catch interest and want to learn more.
you're a good story teller. i look forward to reading more. thanks for sharing.
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June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story. It was epic. I have to say it wasn't as angsty as I thought it would be. And for that I say THANK YOU SO FREAKING MUCH. I was sure I was going to have an ulcer but you proved me wrong so my tummy thanks you as well. I loved how passionate they were toward each other. Makes you wish that kinda love was easily identifiable irl. Thank you again and I hope to see more stories from you.
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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was so perfect. LOL @ Shikamaru and Neji. I wasn't expecting that. This was such a sweet ending and I sooooo can't wait for a sequel...I was also wondering if you would be my beta for a fic I'm writing. Great job!
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! that was soo friggin adorable :)
i loved the end :) and i love itachi's lil tease...
dei is gonna get it lol
As always i enjoyed it and can't wait to c ur next work of
brilliance :) so until next time!!!! Ja Ne!!
i loved the end :) and i love itachi's lil tease...
dei is gonna get it lol
As always i enjoyed it and can't wait to c ur next work of
brilliance :) so until next time!!!! Ja Ne!!
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww!! Q.Q there together again YAAY! OMG I love it. Hehe I realy hope it isen't over yet I am so not ready for it to be over Lol ^^ Not trying to suck up but your writing is so good! X3 I cant wait to know what happends I hope they get to the L.O.V.E part in the relationship ^^ Love it when Sasuke gets all mushy with Naruto XD Makes it so cuuute. I'll keep in touch. I put my email this time just in case Lol WOO! Keep up the good work love love love it. Made me cry a bit at how much they missed eachother XD!
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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's amazing Naruto could get a word in edgewise the way Sasuke was pawing at him. Jesus, one would think that Sasuke breathed through his dick and Naruto had a respirator up his ass.
Shikamaru and Neji are naughty boys, LOL. That was priceless!
Well, ahem, this fic is finished and I thank you very much for your diligence. I look forward to reading your sequel, which I am confident will be JUST as SPLENDID as this fic was. And if I may make a suggestion, there needs to be more Shikamaru x Neji smut in your sequel. Please?
Shikamaru and Neji are naughty boys, LOL. That was priceless!
Well, ahem, this fic is finished and I thank you very much for your diligence. I look forward to reading your sequel, which I am confident will be JUST as SPLENDID as this fic was. And if I may make a suggestion, there needs to be more Shikamaru x Neji smut in your sequel. Please?