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yay!!!!! sasuke and naruto r gonna have sex again
i can just feel another lemon comin ;) they're both
so sexualy frustrated i can't BELIEVE sasuke didn't
bend naruto over the desk and have his dirty way with him >.<
loved the chapie, here's a cookie ^.^ keep up the awesome work doll

I love this story so far!Are you going to keep going?

This chapter is pretty good. I dunnno if it's lacking something or whatever, but it feels way too short and like it should be longer or something. I dunno.

Maybe you should write a chapter where Naruto dominates Sasuke. (I'll even draw SasuNaru with a kimono on Naruto) Of course, that's only if it makes me super fangirl. xDDDD Kidding~! But I'd like it if I could super fangirl while reading the NaruSasu chapter.

The part where Sasuke and Sakura were apologizing to each other, with the foreigner bit, that was hilarious. In fact, much of this chapter had me laughing out loud.

Again, the editor in me pipes up: Naruto checked what "close he bought" - I think that should read "clothes he brought" instead.

Can't wait for another chapter.

*melts into a puddle of SasuNaru joy* This is great - I like the facets of Sasuke and Naruto that you've picked out and highlighted, they're so perfect for each other. And with a side of ItaDei too! *squee*

All right!

I love Naruto's and Sakura's friendship, it's very cool here, which is rare these days! I love how Diedara and Sakura are like total teenage girls around each other, it's so cute! And I love Sasuke's thoughts. He's a wicked, wicked boy!

But mostly I loved how Sasuke handled his business so well that Naruto couldn't help but tell Sakura, "it was amazing."

HELL YES!

I love this story so far. Please update soon

of course i loved this chapter as well!!
and it might have a little to do with the fact
that u update the day i left my comment ^.^
can't wait to c how itachi embarrasses his otouto
*insert evil laugh* :D

Argh!!!! I really hate the spam filter of AFF! My review did not get posted cause of that stupid thingy! Oh well~ I do love this story enough to write another review again!

I gotta tell you that I really ♥ this story. This chapter in particular has a 'getting to know each other' feel to it. It's refreshing and definitely different from the usual, they grew up together or they went to school together kind of fic.

While I love reading a PWP type of story sometimes, a story like this with them slowly getting to know each other, attracted yet unsure kind of fic is very alluring.

I can't wait to read more of your work! Thanks for sharing!

So far so good. Although I still think the formal dinner with Itachi, Deidara, Sakura, Naruto and Sasuke should have Sasuke and Naruto sneaking off for a bathroom quickie. The bathroom can be one with mirrors surrounding the toilet stall. <333333