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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi Hello! Me again!
Oh good gracious its after 1am. I'm tired but I dont want to go to bed without reviewing this fic so i'll try to keep it short (I tend to be long winded) and to the point =)
I LOVE IT!
Ok, the end. =D
Lol kidding, although I do love it, that's to vague for a review.
I couldn't stop grinning when I was reading the meeting room scene. How scandalous of Sasuke not to let them know he spoke English!! But such great humor when Naruto found out later! That was awesome xD And those outfits!! I want to purchase clothing from Sakura's line!! D= !!! Tis not fair to describe such awesome clothing and the reader can't run out and make a purchase after reading!! D= Those business cards were kick ass too by the way. I want to recreate them for the hell of it xD
Naruto and Sasuke hopped in the sack pretty damn fast, but it didn't actually seem rushed, It was just right. But I'm not sure how much that means coming from me cuz I've got a rather large yaoi bias that claims that sexy menz should be sexin eachother up as soon as humanly possible in any and all occasions.
Since neither of them are the "wham bam thank you ma'am" type I'm excited about what they are going to do now after they've had passionate love within hours of meeting one another. Shweeee!! I hope you update soon! I'll bake you cookies! xD
XOXOX Kei-chan
Oh good gracious its after 1am. I'm tired but I dont want to go to bed without reviewing this fic so i'll try to keep it short (I tend to be long winded) and to the point =)
I LOVE IT!
Ok, the end. =D
Lol kidding, although I do love it, that's to vague for a review.
I couldn't stop grinning when I was reading the meeting room scene. How scandalous of Sasuke not to let them know he spoke English!! But such great humor when Naruto found out later! That was awesome xD And those outfits!! I want to purchase clothing from Sakura's line!! D= !!! Tis not fair to describe such awesome clothing and the reader can't run out and make a purchase after reading!! D= Those business cards were kick ass too by the way. I want to recreate them for the hell of it xD
Naruto and Sasuke hopped in the sack pretty damn fast, but it didn't actually seem rushed, It was just right. But I'm not sure how much that means coming from me cuz I've got a rather large yaoi bias that claims that sexy menz should be sexin eachother up as soon as humanly possible in any and all occasions.
Since neither of them are the "wham bam thank you ma'am" type I'm excited about what they are going to do now after they've had passionate love within hours of meeting one another. Shweeee!! I hope you update soon! I'll bake you cookies! xD
XOXOX Kei-chan
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Naruto falling asleep to Japanese classical music while wearing Sasuke's yukata was a very nice touch. Great chapter. You captured the emotions amazingly well.
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww that was nice
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I have been following this story but I was so intrigued by the way you described the music I went on a mad search for Hoshun. I like it. Thanks!
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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
damn that was good!
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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i don't normally review but.....
i loved it!! god plz update soon!!!!
i loved it!! god plz update soon!!!!
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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... thats a whole lot of the word fuck(and an excellent fuck). lol. Awesome chapter, and we had TACHI!!! *fangirling* I w=canbt wait to see the morning after. Its bound to be good. But the temp was uped and Im listening to more Trancy techno. WHOOO!
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooh, very nice story, just read the two chapters. I like it, and it's going to be very fun to read future chapters as well :)
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally, they got on the same wavelength! And no translation was required.
Yummy.
Yummy.
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! So Hot!!! I can't wait to see what happens next....shit Naruto has to go back to the states sooner or later..so what will our cold heart bastard do ????? Will the icile stuck in his ass melt and beg Naruto to stay? Or will our smexy Uchiha go with our smexy blond?
Inquiring minds what to know...well as least I do ;OP
Post soon!!
Inquiring minds what to know...well as least I do ;OP
Post soon!!