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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww that was so sweet. I love this! You see so awesome with the fast updates!
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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is officially one of my favourites! I had so many "Awwww" moments and at first I couldn't believe that Sasuke let Naruto go! And Itachi was so mean. I really want to see him suffering through a few months without Deidara. Then we will see if he can concentrate *evil grin* Btw I'm so happy you decided to write a sequel. I love you <3
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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoy reading your story. gret a seuel what a good idear!! i will be wainting!!! See you soon !!!!!!!!!
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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Can't wait for the sequel! Great job!
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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Happy happy joy joy!!! Finally they can move forward with some hope of a full relationship. That Neji sure does have a vicious streak in him. Kinda had a feeling about the Neji/Shika relationship, but was confused because I thought Neji would have met Sakura already and he should not be so excited to go out to dinner & a show with them. Guess he couldn't show his rabid fanaticism at work. Hehe, Dei is so gonna get it. As for the story in general, I can see how you would have to start a sequel and the "Mixed Communication" has now been resolved into a mutually gratifying commitment. Though, I think Sasu will make sure Naru has his phone strapped to him in some way, shape, or form before going anywhere from now on. :)
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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FUCKING GAWD!!! You totally rocked this! LOVE LOVE LOVE! Out of 5 stars...? 20! Lol. The Neji/Shika? Total surprise! But the end Ita/Dei was a plus too. But woooow. I just loved this.
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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to say 'Bravissimo'.
I've been following this fic the past week or so, and I just finished it. If I say so myself, it was magnificent. I read the first 16 chapters all at once, so I skimmed over the naughty parts, so strong was my desire to know what happened next. However, I went back and re-read them afterwards; your talent is extraordinary in both the erotic writing and the innocuous. The plot is cohesive, well thought-out, touching, and reads well both in individual chapters and as a seamless whole. The writing is evocative -- In more ways than one ;) -- and grasping.
Congratulations, 5/5.
-Ereidivh
I've been following this fic the past week or so, and I just finished it. If I say so myself, it was magnificent. I read the first 16 chapters all at once, so I skimmed over the naughty parts, so strong was my desire to know what happened next. However, I went back and re-read them afterwards; your talent is extraordinary in both the erotic writing and the innocuous. The plot is cohesive, well thought-out, touching, and reads well both in individual chapters and as a seamless whole. The writing is evocative -- In more ways than one ;) -- and grasping.
Congratulations, 5/5.
-Ereidivh
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June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter: pandemonium!
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June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
naruto's phone is not lost any more. what will be itachi punition ?? I love your story !! see you soon
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June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was such a dick thing for Itachi to say. D: But won't Sasuke be surprised to see Naruto! =]