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by kaiyousama

schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww. So sad.
person richon
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
what they did'nt do anything , sasu just freeze where is the proud hchiha. hopefuly jyraiya is in japan , naru will be back
person airhead622
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol!! oh shit what kind of trouble is Jiraiya going to get into now???
i'm hoping that Naruto will have to come back to japan to get him...
And then a happy SasuNaru reunion can occur ;D
person Anon
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasu & Naru. How ever will they cope???
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Girl!!! Omg! And here I thought we were winding down to a close soon, but oh no buddy! Jiji is in the house and poor poor Naru! I can't live without my phone... And Sasu-chan! What is he gonna think when he calls and only gets v-mail?! Naruto better hurry and get on t-mobile's web site so he can get all his contacts again. Lol. I love this story and it bring me happiness when I see an update. I even started the side fic. Can't wait to see more!
person Carousel
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry. And I'm so sad because Naruto doesn't have his phone. It's with Sasuke! There is going to be an awful mix up and your going to break your faithful readers hearts, hopefully repairing them quickly. I don't know how I will survive! The lyrics were great, by the way. =]
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're right, it did, and you wrote it beautifully. I'm so happy that you've taken up this story again!
person qwerty
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! He left his phone!
Surely Naruto has Deidara's number and so he can pass a message to Sasuke through him, right?
Good chapter!
person Anon
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i hope that what is under sasu's bed is a cell phone(naruto's cell phone?)

hmmm anyway i'm glad this chapter was sasunaru centered. not that i don't like your tachidei chapters, but they have their own side fiction going on so i think this fiction should focus more on the two main characters of sasunaru. i could have sworn itachi was going to pull out a ticket for sasuke and tell him to go get his blonde....ugh....so sad for sasu all curled up in bed.
person Kai
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG That was so sad, Poor sasuke, And omg he left his phone NOOO! -sobs- I cried my eyes out literaly T.T such a sad chapter but vary good. omg I love it -sobs- please write soon I need to know