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May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your welcome anytime! ^ ^
But I love how Itachi treats Dei-dei. Its beautifully endearing. And "play time" between Naru and Sasu-chan was too cute! I'm continuing to love this fic more and more. I'm waiting impatiently for next time. Until then though, Ja!
But I love how Itachi treats Dei-dei. Its beautifully endearing. And "play time" between Naru and Sasu-chan was too cute! I'm continuing to love this fic more and more. I'm waiting impatiently for next time. Until then though, Ja!
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May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmm Im with Sasuke, theres something undeniably ..HOT. About coming inside him. Hidden kink I never knew I had? I think so. HOT STUFF none the less! =)
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May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story line. I'm so eager to see how the rest comes together. Not to mention the smut is fantastic.
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May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The history lesson/performance was awesome and greatly appericated. The details were good enough that I almost feel that I was there. Lol.
Oh and. You had a little typo... It was the last scene with Sakura. You said the time difference between Japan and Tokyo. I just wanted to tell you!
Until next time~
Ja!
Oh and. You had a little typo... It was the last scene with Sakura. You said the time difference between Japan and Tokyo. I just wanted to tell you!
Until next time~
Ja!
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May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i enjoy this chapter, a bit complicate but it's okay, the dei's show hard, but the truth is not always beautifull! see youy soon!!
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May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter ^^ Cant wait for the next one I'm addicted to this story please right more soon Well done!!
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Itachi and Diedara.
Man, that's hot.
Man, that's hot.
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL "Do you have baseball in Japan?"
Whoever said "baka" was straight on the money.
The Japanese reinvented the sport!
Whoever said "baka" was straight on the money.
The Japanese reinvented the sport!
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You held us in suspence on Dei's show for some time. It was really intense. Love the risk taking Dei and love the evil, revengeful Itachi.
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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn, love the smut. Heh. To start with, your story idea; very creative. I only wish that you could have played a bit more with that gag though, there's so much you can do with a theme like that. P=
Compared to your first story, this one is a lot more of what I'd encounter in the fandom (not that it's a bad thing) but it's missing that pacing of yours that I really liked. Some part of the getting into the sex part felt a bit surreal.
The ItaDei interlude felt a bit forced. It would have been great if you have found a way to ease it into the story. It felt more like FYI instead of a part of the story. It would have worked better if you teased us with a bit of info and then made a spin-off. Am I making sense here? >_o
Anyways, overall, I'm so watching you, because the characters are funny, your jokes are witty and it's a good story =D
Cheers
Compared to your first story, this one is a lot more of what I'd encounter in the fandom (not that it's a bad thing) but it's missing that pacing of yours that I really liked. Some part of the getting into the sex part felt a bit surreal.
The ItaDei interlude felt a bit forced. It would have been great if you have found a way to ease it into the story. It felt more like FYI instead of a part of the story. It would have worked better if you teased us with a bit of info and then made a spin-off. Am I making sense here? >_o
Anyways, overall, I'm so watching you, because the characters are funny, your jokes are witty and it's a good story =D
Cheers