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by kaiyousama

person 7troublesome
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story - especialy after the stroy of Dei and Ita started - who could ever have thought that Itachi could be patient and kind - wow! And I am totally fascinated about the part where Naruto was planning to take a job in Ambassy, right? Totally awesome, the copmarison to positive reincarnation of Hitler is so frickin' funny!
person richon
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading your story. i want to know what shikamaru has in mind and what itachi will say. I am craving for more !! see you soon
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaay!!! I'm so happy that you're back and posting. I started the story completely over again cuz its been so long that I needed the refresher. I still love the story and Jiji has me wondering what the fuck is he thinking... Lol. I can't wait to see more, so until then.

Ja!
person Anon
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Naughty Itachi & Dei. Maybe Naru can give Sasuke a personal underwear-wearing air guitar solo performance to assuage his guilt.
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That whole 'composed Uchiha' schtick is mondo-annoying. Just once I'd like to see Sasuke get rip-roaring drunk, don a lampshade and stand on a table doing a striptease.

Maybe you could figure out a way to write that into your next story.
person Anon
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i liked the flow of that chapter...i'm starting to get worried about the "leaving".....poor sasuke-kun he's going to lose his love again...uhg...angsty feeling....but i know you'll work it out lovely...can't wait to read more...thanks for the update.
person airhead622
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! u updated again :) great chapter :)
and did u mention sumthing about a sidefic???
i'm officially interested!!! would the sidefic still b sasunaru
or will it be focusing more on other couples?
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Diedara should share.
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naru... getting interupted in the middle of some fine underwear-wearing air guitar strumming. Makes you wonder if Sasuke intentionally "forgot" to tell Naru to watch out for the cleaning lady as revenge for his work-time fun. Also could be that Naru is just such an intense distraction that it just slipped his mind. Hmmmm... In either case, totally funny for us. :)
person cynaga
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
delightfully fun romp!~