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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. I liked how they first recognised it was love before they made love. From the beginning it had been about connecting with someone, mainly physically. Then it was the act and pleasures they garnered from it. Eventually it was love and that was only confirmed once they had realised it was indeed with each other. That one act was GORGE lol.
What was a little awkward was their revelation. I can't put my finger on it but there was something missing there. Still it was beautiful.
Thank you so much for sharing :)
What was a little awkward was their revelation. I can't put my finger on it but there was something missing there. Still it was beautiful.
Thank you so much for sharing :)
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg that was good. The story was great as well as the song. And you're taking request! Ima look up your email to send you one!
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
-crys- no email shown! But Can I request a couple/song? GaaraxNeji with the song being "Venus as a boy" by Bjork? please
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. It made me wish that it wasn't just a oneshot. I agree with you. oneshots can have awkward endings. I usually don't like to write them either. This was awesome though =]