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for Bright Lights

by KageKitsuneXXX

person roro237
schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I totally enjoyed ^_^
person Kerrisa
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awe you have a knack for writing things that end super sweet!

Favorite lines:

1) "Why didn't you tell me that I look white!?"

2) " 'Bullshit, you’re in love with me aren’t you.'

'I’d say yes but I don’t want to die.' "

I was laughing so hard! Omg those were awesome xD!! Lol go figure that Naruto would get big as a fitness instructor and that Sasuke would have a katana on display that he was seriously thinking about using against a possible burglar xD Fun fun fun! Perfect bit of fiction to read after a boring day at work! You rock my socks! XOXOXs Kei-Chan
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Apparently, I don’t look Japanese either. I went into one of the Japanese towns here to get some decent ramen, and all the Japanese people looked at me funny when I was making conversation. Why didn’t you tell me that I look white?!”

“You’re a natural blond with blue eyes… I thought you knew this already.”

oh I love you for that! you made my day, I laught so hard I cried:D
not only one of my favorite writers but a Matchbox 20 fan to boot!

made my day with you foot-note, a new series and "Role Play" a deux would be welcomed with great enthusiasum.
but if there be one-shots, bring 'em on!!!
your a gem, thanks:)
person babe
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love it. nicely written...thank you so much. :)
person tovah
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the Fluffiness!!!
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was sweet. I notice you have a thing for models in your fics the way I have a thing for cops and lawyers in mine.